Really enjoyed this read. Thank you.

A good chapter. Thanks

A good chapter.

A nice chapter.

A really good start.

Thanks for sharing this quick and fun little story. Well fun in the end but not so much to begin with. You could have stretched this out if you wanted but it still worked for me. Hope you get some more readers just like me who just happened to stumble across this and take a chance. :-)

aw... the awkwardness at the beginning is so sweet.

"managing overpopulation of predators" haha! that was a great canon goodie snuck in! and "too bad I'm not a mind reader"

*sigh* what a great ending! Jessica went completely bonkers. A sad ending too, considering all the time that's been lost, but the title to this chapter is a happy twist on that. They can begin again now :)

Great little story! I really enjoyed your writing. Are you thinking about writing anything else Twilighty? (by the way, I hope you get this review. Something's wrong with the site today. I see new reviews coming in but I can't access them)

Whoa! Charlie sure had an opinion about Alice showing up. It was kind of sweet to see him put some energy into being protective of his daughter.

oh! So somebody set them both up with fake pictures? That's so awful! I wonder who? Tanya? Mike? Lauren? Aro? LOL. And of course they mangled the rest of it themselves with all those tragic miscommunications.

This chapter was just awesome! It was longer, and just full of beautiful, well-written descriptions, from Edward's violent reaction to the pictures, to the happy memories of the piano moments, to Bella burying herself in the sunlit grass at the end, afraid to look up and see who's coming. Very well done. can't wait to see the end!

I just saw the cool bookend-y format of your chapter titles. That was a neat idea, and hopefully it means a happy ending for our favorite couple :)

aw from the memories, it sounds like they had a really great time together before the picture incident. Certainly doesn't sound like he would have cheated on her, especially not how it appeared in the pictures.

I don't usually read AH stories but this looks good!

I wonder who the blonde is? Tanya? I guess it really happened because Esme acted all weird. Oh no! Communicate, people! What's going to happen!

great story.

So... if he new that Jessica was behind all this why did he wait 3-4 years? He didn't try to contact her..

I loved.. this story is so beautiful, and romantic.. It's amazing! Congratulations :D

I think you did a good job writing Edward as human and I agree about Bella marrying Edward in this also. Thanks for sharing this and looking forward to reading more of your stories. :)

Aw this is cute! I think you really portrayed their characters well.