Amazing idea! Really disappointed that the creators got lazy and failed to think of this, even if it would shorten the series. Thank you for this masterpiece 3

Nice!

Damn this was a great idea.

I love this story!

That was great!

I like it! Anyways good one-shot and keep up the great work.

Perfect. I've been looking for a story like this since I watched the show six months ago. Very well done

Definitely a good story - and lol on the public reactions to the Yui/Kazuto/Asuna situation XD

That said, I really don't agree on 'character assassination'; being in distress once doesn't (and didn't) derail her status, but that's just me.

This was nice. That is one thing that I have been disliking about the next arcs, Asuna has been cut out a lot. Not to mention we barely see any of the other central players anymore. Like, what the hell happened to Argo. Seems to me fighting with someone for 2 years would create a deeper bond. Never thought of your method but I always wondered why Kirito did not call on more SAO survivors. I am sure many of them owed him favors or just because. Harder to stop 100 clearer's in ALO then just Kirito.

Very well written. It would have been interesting to see it go slower and deeper, but 6000 words is pretty good. The way you captured the characters was very close to canon. Good job. Kirito is probably the most OOC though, even though it's not much. He just seems so much more open than he would otherwise. I can see how this was necessary though for the story. Last, the only other thing that bothered me was that you kept Kleins name but not Agil's. You called him Andrew. Just stuck out with him saying one username and one real name. Idk. Great job overall.
-Furr

A nice way to show a new beginning.

I liked it. although I can see why in the LAO arc yui did not have admin privileges. this would have happened and there would be no action. but still a nice take on it.

Well dang. Not sure on the whole start with patching Yui and her being able to do that all, but this is certainly a believable version of the story and much better in some ways than the series actually went. Well done, -JKK

That was an incredible story. GREAT JOB.

Well that was more logical then the original ALO arc. Pity we didn't see Sugou ranting like a maniac over power, fairness, and everything. *rolls eyes* Sugou would have been quietly murdered the moment he actually tried to sell his mind control research. No one is going to let a loose cannon like him keep such a dangerous tech. Any offers he would have gotten would stink to high heaven of entrapment to a normal person. Only a freak like Sugou would take such obvious bait and no doubt get himself killed. In essences Kirito has saved Sugou again but at least he didn't give Kayaba's ghost control of the VR world.