I love that Elsa regain her sense in the mention of Anna.. This is the second time it happened.. But then, Elsa tried to commit suicide.. Poor Elsa, she can't live without Anna.. Fortunately, Anna manage to prevent Elsa from killing herself.. You manage to give us a satisfying ending with the voices finally gone and the Eden-stone shining brighter than it ever had before, a prove that Elsa is definitely a worthy ruler..

I love the scene of little Elsa comforting baby Anna.. It's so cute.. Elsa is a very good sister.. Poor Elsa, she is in despair after Hans told her that Anna is dead because of her..

I love the physical incarnation of faux-Anna making a conversation with Elsa.. It feels like Elsa's nightmare has become true.. It really is the worst for Elsa because it's so real and it happened when she is conscious and not asleep to be regards as a dream.. Poor Elsa, she has to relive one of her trauma of Anna hating her and despise her..

The voices manage to control Elsa for a while.. I love that Elsa's mind become clear in the mention of Anna.. It shows that Anna is very important in Elsa's life and how much love Elsa has for Anna..

I agree that Elsa is now a caterpillar.. She has to hide away until she can blossom into a beautiful butterfly.. You are really creative in giving Elsa something to relate to..

You have done a good job in portraying Elsa's expression of emotion in the newfound sense of freedom.. I'm really happy that Elsa has no fear and no pain in the end of this chapter..

The King is too late to realize the damage that he has done to Elsa.. Poor Elsa, she has live in agony for so many years..

I love the vision of the future that the voices show Elsa, about what would happen if Elsa rules Arendelle, about the possibility of Elsa becoming a monster.. You have done a good job in displaying it..

I like that the voices came when Elsa and Anna argue.. I love that Elsa accidentally revealed her power because of the voices, because it was too much for her to handle the haunting voices..

So, Elsa has opened her door for Anna the day of the funeral.. At least Elsa tells Anna herself that she won't be attending the funeral..

So, the King may have kill Elsa when she was born if he knew what Elsa could do.. Poor Elsa, she has done nothing wrong..

I love the voices that you created for Elsa.. You have done a good job in exploring Elsa’s mental state..

That was an interesting take on the original Frozen storyline. It was a bit strange not to have Olaf around from the mid on, but then again a comic relief character such as him doesn't fit that much into the way you told the story. But as Anna and Elsa are basically true to themselves all is forgiven ;)

Yours,
Sven

PS: I'm writing this after already having read up to and including The Storm Rages On.

Welp, that was a hurricane of emotions I will never be able to establish again.

One of the best stories I've read in my world of fanfics. :D Love your story.