Gahhhh got goosebumps, it was THAT good

Well you’re was intimidatingly better than my attempt but like, I already know you’re the best story teller in the world so ONLY YOU could take the stupidest nickname on EARTH and make it sexy HAHA well done on this one!

This was so damn adorable and then hot in the end, I'm in love! Can't get enough of their established relationship fluff 3

I know that many years have passed since you published the story but I read it in one go and I wanted to tell you that I liked it very much! All the initial part and the jokes between them are wonderful and the final part is the icing on the cake

OH dear!

Brilliant xx

This is how I imagine James and Lily's relationship. One of the best one shots I've ever seen. The last scene was done masterfully with the short sentences to speed up the story and show us, the readers the pace of what was happening.

10/10

Their banter is perfection! And the whole idea of her not being able to say it properly is just brilliant!

This story seriously made laugh out loud more than once. I love their teasing, flirty relationship. Steamy smut. Great story.

You nearly made me miss my stop on the train. That is to say, excellent fic. I love how they interact - it's filled equal measures with cute and sexy.
Don't ever stop writing. I'm off to read the rest of your fics x

OMG you mentioned Falmouth.

TO BE QUITE HONEST I THOUGHT IT WAS BECAUSE SHE KEPT IMAGINING HIM FUCKING HER WITH THE ACTUAL PRONGS I LIKE YOUR IDEA BETTER

Absolutely loved your characterization! I was laughing out loud at parts, and smiling like an idiot from the moment Lily explained her aversion to calling him Prongs until the very end. Kudos to you!

Perfect :)

Brilliant!
I love the idea and everything, so awesome!
I cracked up when she revealed why she can't say Prongs, genius as per usual! :) Have a great day