I Did not like Jason either but he are some reasons I over come that. the reason I did not like him was because of Percy. Percy is my favorite character and anyone that threatens his power i did not like. But I liked them soon as Percy won or he regained more power than them. Thalia join hunters, Bianca sadly . Nico left camp and had to training. Now with Jason he is very strong just not as strong as Percy. Nico loves Percy but hates to admit it so he will not be nice if not truly necessary. so when he said "Percy is the strongest demigod I know" he knew people would not argue or think anything of it because if it true and everyone knew it . So give Jason a chance he is a good character and did nothing wrong but challenge Percys strength.

Pleeeease update! This story I
Is really goood!

in Italy 13 is considered lucky and 17 unlucky, so, shouldn't Nico be happy his cabin is number 13

Hey, this story has an excellent plot but too much internal monologue. More dialogue and action (not necessarily violence) is needed. For example, you could have added the scene where nico tells Percy he's leaving for a quest (I actually expected this). Or had a scene where Percy finds anabeth's reaction to nico odd. Or more scenes of Percy healing.
Anyways, this isn't a flame, just constructive criticism.

this is crazy good, and i CAN wait for the next chapter because everyone updates at their own pace

GAHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! MY HEART

Oof.
Okay, in the beginning, I was like, "Oh! There are 43 chapters? And this hasnt been continued since December of 2016? This is a completed series! Cool."
But it apparently isnt finished, to my suprise. Not a bad thing though!

I dont know if thisll be seen, but in case it is, hi. I dont expect this to continue (though youve set up a prom scene which I could prob just imagine in my head). I just want to say that I absolutely freaking loved this so much and I hope youre continuing whatever cool things I know youll be doing in life. (Was that a bit forward? Probably.)

This was great, and adorable, and cute, and I loved it so much. Dont down yourself. The display of emotion was captivating. Much love to this story and youre writing and you. 3

I just found this story and finished reading it a couple of days ago. It was really compelling and had some great angst. I thought you developed Percy and Nico's relationship really well and I can believe that they are going to have a happy ending together. The Hazel stuff was really good too, it's believable that she wouldn't react well. And even if someone loves you there's no guarantee that they are going to accept you. It was really realistic and I could really empathise with Nico's fears.
I know you haven't updated this for a while but the last chapter ended at a happy enough place for me. Honestly I don't think there's any need to continue the story through so much of Percy and Nico's relationship, if that's what's been worrying you. I think maybe the only thing that needs a conclusion is Nico and Hazel's relationship, but that doesn't necessarily mean you have to write all of Hazel's slow development towards acceptance. It could just be Nico accepting that he's lost that relationship with his sister, but that's her problem, not his, and he has Percy and other friends to support him.

Anyway, thanks for the great read!

Please update! This is too amazing to leave unfinished!

you're such an amazing writer. This pulled at my heartstrings so much !

AWWWWWWWWWWW

This is one of my all time favorite fics! Please pleaae please update!

*chokes on air*

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So did Nico and Percy fall into Tartarus together instead of Percy and Annabeth?