Hmm, I really want to read this moving on but Elsa is a bit childish. Her reactions, choice of words, how she handles the situation. Already implied the obvious path of the story. So I’ll stop for now, maybe come back later. But still, kudos for writing.

I can understand why some people don't like the ElsaxHans ship, he'll I don't like it! But to not read a fanfic just because the it's the main ship? That just is such a retarted and rude thing to do. I read this fanfic all the way and I enjoyed it despite it having a ship I didn't like. Sure Hans is a bad guy but that's because of how he was treated at home. His brothers didn't particularly treat him well, since he was royalty, and last in line for the throne it just piled together, and when a chance to prove himself to his brothers was presented to him he took it. Hans can be redempted, hell the creators of Frozen themselves want to make a redemption ark for Hans!

Getting off track here...

Anyway, you shouldn't be a fool and let the ship you like determine what fanfic is worth your time because that is such a rude thing to do to the ones who put their time and effort into making these fanfics.

This fanfic was really good and should deffinantly get better attention.

I loved it...amazing job!

wow I like this so far :) a twist from the usual prisoner hans seeking redemption, although I also enjoy that storyline

*gasp* He doesn't have the antidote at all...

DAAANG... Great Chapter

You make Elsa falls in love with Hans? How is that possible? Hans was the one who locked Anna in a room then leaving her to die, try to kill Elsa, then come back for revenge, poison Anna and then force Elsa to marry him.. It’s impossible that Elsa can fall in love with someone like that.. I guess you really ship Helsa.. I don’t want to read a love story between Elsa and Hans.. I never approve this shipping.. I will stop reading this story because I really can’t stand my favorite character in Frozen (Elsa) together with one of my least favorite (Hans)..

What have you done? Out of all people who can help Elsa, you choose Hans.. Why can’t you just let a woman help Elsa? Why it has to be Hans, the one we all hate?

Elsa could die if nobody help her.. With her face in the water, she could be drown.. You don’t intend to kill Elsa off, right? Now, I should read the next chapter..

It’s understandable if Anna doesn’t want to come to Elsa’s wedding if Elsa still want to marry Hans.. I know that Elsa is forced to the marriage but Anna doesn’t want to become the reason Elsa marrying an enemy..

Now that Anna knows about the wedding, she will confront Elsa about it.. Anna will never let Elsa marry Hans even if her life is on stake..

I know Elsa will agree to marry Hans.. There’s no other way.. Hans is so cruel.. I hate him..

Hans is so evil.. Elsa need to marry him in order to get the antidote for the poison.. She surely will do it if it’s the only way to save Anna..

Anna got poison by Hans.. Now, Hans will get ready for his next plan to get Elsa..

Kristoff has ask Elsa’s blessing for marrying Anna.. I know that Elsa still doesn’t want to let go of Anna as they still have a long way to reconnect their relationship.. But Elsa knows that Anna loves Kristoff and she doesn’t want to be the person to crash Anna’s happiness..