lovely chapter - flows nicely and i cannot wait until you decide on the pairings! id it going to be slash or not? if it is Arian is a good match . though Perenna gives off mother vibes to me... .

love it.

really well written and interesting story so far! I wonder what will happen next?! .

Interesting story so far, can't wait to see where you take it!

Most intriguing

good plot, can't wait to see where you take it.

This sound so good so far and I can't wait to see where you can take it. Keep up the good work.