That was really good

This is a great story, and it is just dying for an epilogue with Ichigo completing the mating claim on Grimmjow. And maybe what happened to the rest of the main characters, like Renji, Karin, Yuzu, Orihine, Chad, Ishida, etc. Please finish it! It’s too good to leave partially finished like this.

there's going to be more right?

I feel like this needs a good epilogue

I was hoping Starrk would reunite with Juushiro and Shunsui in the end... T_T

WHY?! THEY JUST HAD TO KILL STARRK?!
This fic just broke my heart again into itsy-bitsy million pieces!

Noni trying to scare the fish out the water.. Lmmfao RAR!

Your story was good. Would love to see a Shunsui Stark pairing in the future.

I'm not going to lie... I feel that the story had too much sex in the plot! There was a time when I got tired of reading them both sucking off thir dicks but I also know that sometimes it was incredibly sexy, so... it's ok I guess.

I was more concentrated in Grimmjow and Ichigo than Starrk. I like him as a character, but I don't see him with Ukitake or the other Captain. It was really weird for me all the time.

I felt very sorry for Byakuya, too. Uhg, being with Yammy must have been horrible. Thank God Rukia died. Byakuya would rather die than be seen that way by his sister.

But overall, I amused myself reading your story.
Thanks for everything.
And sorry for my english, lol.

Well it's been a few months can we get the update I would really like to know if they did Starrk and Lily. Also, how Ichis handling being Soul King!

Hi! I truly like the concept of the good and bad side of the primera. I didn't grasp that in your "saki and amaretto" story but the way it is presented here is very convincing. I especially liked one of your last sentences, about starrk knowing right and wrong and lilinette not, it was quite a brilliant notion.
Best,
Coraz.

Ah! damn, this chapter was good ;) first, I like the fact that grimmjow has once fallen for Nel, this part was very cute and surprising. Then, the fishing part was very funny. I wonder what will happen with tesla involvement though...
Best,
Coraz.

Kind of a very anti climatic ending. It feels as though as if some parts are still incomplete. it would be good if you wrote another chapter as an epilogue. maybe explaining more about ichigo and the children in the king's realm/ging back to soul society or even a scene of shunsui and juushiro finding starrk. Very good story otherwise.

waaahhhh pooor stark-san

lol unohana ripped noitra's ball offf muhhahahha

an absolutely amazing story! really loved reading it. great ideas and nice plot.

Oh my god you finally updated! It wasnt quite what I was expecting (in a good way) but I'm ever so thankful that you wrote something _