Waiting for an update on this story, if you decide to do so.

This is such a creative and fascinating story! Painful too, of course. Very painful. Which, in the world of writing, is a really admirable thing. Your writing is beautiful, crisp and smooth, and your characterizations are so unique, without seeming OOC. I know it's been a long time since the story was updated, for which I'm sure you have a very good reason, but I'd be absolutely delighted if you decided to continue it. It's such a promising beginning, and a captivating plot idea, and your writing definitely deserves more attention than it's gotten. :)

Can't wait for an update!

This is a really great story and with a good beta reader you could probably write a great book.

Oh my crispy bacon. You are truly amazing! The first word that popped into my mind after reading the first chapter was "WOW", i swear i couldn't stop reading this perfect thing of yours. Please, please, please! i beg you to make more of your wonderful stories! I am absolutely blown away.

Double dang! Crying right now!

Dang! You made me feel!

You have no idea how much you're naking me cry right now. This is such a beautiful piece of art!

I'm probably a part of that small percentage of the Frozen fandom who'll always have a soft spot for Hans. His character is just more complex beneath what is really shown to us in the movie. I like his character, but this is making me favor Hans over Elsa! How I wish this was canon.

Everything about Hans in here is so sad that it's making me want to transport nyself into this story and just take Hans into my arms to hug him and take his pain away. Hopefully, Hans sees a little love for him in the next chapter.

I love the pace, the plot, the writing style, and the portrayal of the characters in this story. Keep uo the awesome work and update soon (no pressure though)!

this is a wonderful story,love it,please update soon.

very good story,more please.

AHHHHHHHHHHHH I love everything about this! The use of fire imagery to describe things he does, the fact that he automatically connected with Elsa, GRANDDAD (I'm crying this is not okay) - all of it. I may have gushed about this a few other times, but I am compelled to let you know that your writing style is so fluid, so descriptive, so, so beautiful - it's like I've stepped into a stream of words, and I never want to come out.

Seems interesting! A good plot!

Before I give you my review for this just let me put the facts right because I fear that may my review in first chapter wasn't so clear. What I wanted to say was that I didn't mind Hans story when I watched the movie but your story and the way you write it has changed the way I see Hans. I know you understood what I wanted to say but I have to put the facts straight for all the rest who will read the reviews. *I blame my new laptop for this error...still learning how to use a laptop and not a desktop. * Moving on to the actual review now; Hans proclaiming himself guilty before the beginning of the trail and his brother threatening the people he holds most dear...I am not a violent person, I do not support violence and I support the abolishment of the capital punishment however I want to see Adolphus dead or at least suffering! He is a horrid man! And he does all that because he wants power! Only your story and a book named "Beneath a marble sky" have made me to hate a character. Actually hate them. Moving on, Hans reflecting upon his thoughts about Anna and Elsa is heartbreaking! You could see that he might get along with them if not for his brother and his schemes. Hans punishment is very very interesting! I really want to see what you have next! Really you are giving me intriguing ideas with your story and I will be there until the end. Carry on the spectacular work!

Amazing story, please do keep it up and I will be sure to read it when you update.

I love this fan fiction. It really portrays Hans as someone you can like and understand. It was wonderful how you could turn my intense hatred for him into something more along the lines of pity and understanding.
I hope you update soon.