Reviews for My second life
Page of Pentacles chapter 3 . 9/19
Ok, I'm confused. Now Violet is a third year? As in a Junior/11th grader? The same year as Bella? Am I misunderstanding something? I hope there is some clarification about ages and school coming up soon. My head is spinning.
Loved the bit about maybe being allergic to Jasper, lol.
Page of Pentacles chapter 2 . 9/19
sigh
I'm intrigued by this story, as a sucker for girl falls into or is reincarnated in whatever fandom. I was also happy to see an older sister over 18 . there aren't many of them on this site. I'm also curious where you take the mood-aura thing. I haven't seen that one done, and I could see auras as a kid so, could be cool!
But then you made her a "return grad." First of all, what the heck is a return grad? That's not a thing. I'm a high school teacher you can't do that. Not in US That I know of and certainly not in my state. If you need her at the school for storyline and interaction there are more believable routes to go. For one she could work at the school as support staff or even a volunteer. She could be in Instructional assistant or cafeteria worker, or in the office. Or you could have just made her close to graduation. Or she could take like community college classes, which are sometimes held at high schools in surrounding communities (usually at night after school but still could be tweaked to work).
I hope I'll be able to overlook this but it's going to eat at me.
maryythisgirl chapter 6 . 7/17
Will there be updates for this story soon? It is so cute and unique. I really like it!
Guest chapter 6 . 6/9/2019
This is really great!
littlemissy3982 chapter 6 . 5/11/2019
I love this so much! I can’t wait for you to update again. I really like the way you have put Violet into the story with the guardian thing!
Leticia20Paixo chapter 5 . 4/7/2019
It is good for Violet to know what will happen in the story, but it would also be good if she told some Cullen about it. That way he would avoid the bullshit Edward would make. U.U
How to warn the Volturi about Bella. Bella should also be warned about some points, such as, not jumping off the cliff. For even if Aro gave up the battle, the war did not end. It may be centuries, at some point he will come back to get Bella and Alice. The more in the dark it gets, on the new additions in coven Cullen, the better. And someone has to teach Carlisle that he's the leader, not Edward.
Why did Edward run away from Bella, but did not Jasper do the same with Violet?
By the way, Jasper and Violet are real mates, but Edward and Bella are not?
Guest chapter 4 . 3/17/2019
I think you mean Forks. Not Folks.
Tsuki chapter 6 . 3/15/2019
Hope you update soon
Whatkooloser chapter 3 . 3/13/2019
Ahhh so cute
forget-me-never-love-me-always chapter 5 . 10/28/2018
Yeah I really am enjoying your story. I will give it a follow and hope you update soon
BleckBlah5956 chapter 5 . 6/4/2018
Please update soon as you can. I love this fic.
Seraphine chapter 4 . 2/22/2018
Oh my glob. There's a new update! I can't wait to read chapter 5. I was literally looking for this fic & started reading it again today & I'm so happy. I fell in love with this fic & I'm so glad to see there's a new update. Woo!
BlossomsAtSunrise chapter 5 . 9/13/2017
Please oh please update soon! I've been looking for a jxoc that is great from how a girl from our world comes to twilight, how they meet, and the dialog and emotions between the characters.
Markosgirl69 chapter 5 . 9/2/2017
Plzplzplzplz update soon?!
Guest chapter 5 . 8/13/2017
Please post more soon! I am so excited to read more especially with the different Pov you put!
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