If it's not too much trouble, I would really appreciate it if you could write a chapter where Charlie gets beaten up as an adult, maybe at 26, but tries to hide it from Don. However, Don realises and helps clean Charlie up and protect him. Kind of like Chapter 1 but with Charlie as an adult.

I've really enjoyed your chapters so far. I've read a lot of younger and older brother fanfiction but your ones are the best ones i've read by a long way.

I really hope you write more with Don and Charlie and I would so appreciate it if you could convert my idea into one of your chapters.

LOVE

Nice stories. :)

love every single story. thank you for this and please more! :)

freakin' amazing. U potrayed don and charlie's relationship exactly the way it should be.

I was pleased to see a new chapter. It's cute.

Just be careful with your tenses. You change from the past to the present half way through. You even have both tenses in one sentence: 'Charlie watches (present) in amazement as his brother threatens (present) the monster, he really was (past) the bravest person he knew (past).

I'm looking forward to more.

D'aaaawww :3 I want a big brother too. He could beat the monsters .
What a lovely chapter :)

I hope you write more :) I love your story.

Aww!

That's soo Charlie-like XD going to a crime scene and not listening to his big bro ;)
I'm soo happy that there's a new chappie :)

This is awesome would love to see more! Maybe Charlie getting bullied by someone at Don's job? Or Charlie getting into trouble at a crime scene? That would be awesome! Your writing is fantastic! I hope you write more soon!

a great read...can we see more of charlie being like the teams little brother...please. They're so cute

This was awesome I love it

Everytime I read a chappie my life is bright again :) I just love the stories you write with the two brothers :3

Oh ... Charlie should be careful XDD Don is probably stronger than him :)