SP18! Uh, are more chapters under a different book or try still coming? Anyways, great work, I love it! Keep it up

Oh my gosh, this is so great. You portray Ruby very well. I don't know if I ever thanked you for putting Ruby and Ryan into your FanFic so I'll just do that now. Thank you so much. I can't wait to see where this story goes. Oh, and in case you're confused this is Brightcloud0915 I just changed my pen name. So keep up the good work, and if you need any more information about Ruby and Ryan just let me know.

Okay, if that reference was to your main, big story, good job. You have officially spoiled the story if that's what it was. I haven read it yet since it seemed like a long series so I stared with this one. Also, don't let what I'm saying affect how you work on your stories. Keep it up! I'm loving it!

this was great. Ryan's personality is spot I love it. I'm so glad you update this story.

Okay with that out of the way... question time:

So Dream what is your favorite place to be? Like where you go to just be alone.

Serena, how much do you like Dream?

Ruby how long have you and Serena been friends?

Ryan where would your ideal date be? Also did you ever like anyone other than Ruby?

Hello there! Nothing to say here, so onto the review!

Great update! Although to be honest it took me... awhile to remember the other's appearance. No offense to the other three, but Dream's features just stuck with me the longest. But now I remember them, hopefully it won't take me longer to remember again... Now I just need the parent's and side characters species... Great, looks like a re-read is in order...

Anyway. The Dream Team- sorry, "Team Dreamers" just got out of and "healed" a corrupted tree monument. And now, they just heard that it isn't the only one. Now they need to venture all over their home land to heal the other corrupted objects, and find out who's and or what's causing this it. Will they succeed or will they fail? Do they know where will they go next? Probably. Will one of them willingly admit who their true feelings for their crush? Eh, doubtful. Tune in next time for the next of... Imagine.

... Okay, that narrator-ish paragraph aside. I liked that sonic reference. :3

I'm guessing some unanswered things will be given answers next time or in the future. Or a clue or two for some them too. So yeah, I think that's about it.

Again, keep up the great work, and can't wait for your next updates! Byez!

Please continue this! I am thoroughly enjoying this story, and it is very entertaining!

Hey SnivyPro18, what type of writing(typing idk ;-;) do you use to make your chapters? I would like to know if it would help me out in making a story

I've decided to read this again becuase I love this story so much. No better reason right? Question for Serena, do you believe in destiny or fate? From the way things are going in your current school life, it seems very coincidental, strange right? I somewhat believe in fate, I think there are a set of designed paths for you to walk on but it's your choice on which one you choose. Does it sound farfetched? Oh yeah this ones for everyone, what is your favorite candy/treat? Mine is vanilla ice cream and jolly ranchers. :3 Can't wait to read more 15thprosnivy

Wow Dream is kinda relatable for me (except the whole having an awesome power part... Maybe)
Question for dream: why didn't you Imagine everyone either not caring about the weird things happening around you or for them to be nicer?

OMG UPDATE!

(Since I already posted a review for the preview, I have'ta be a guest for this. Sowweh. x3)
Ha, Dream finally did the yoga! xD Oh, you love War of the Plates 2? Ohmigosh, everyone that's read that fanfic seems to love it so much. I personally haven't read it, but I'm hoping to soon. All of this favoriting has me hyped for it. :D But first, gotta catch up with all the other fanfics I'm reading! Yeeee!
Hmm... if you'll still use some of my suggestions for the ridiculous weird stuff fro the author notes, how about, uhh... Gasp. Dream, could you make some breathtaking art using the sky as a canvas and clouds as the paint? I'm sure you can, but I'm curious what you'd make with this! :D

Ah, Serena, my mom's also very adamant when it comes to hanging out with friends, especially boys. x3 I know this seems insignificant compared to the rest of the text, but I felt a need to mention this random tidbit. Yeayyyy. :P

The part with Dream imagining the spring meadow on his bedroom wall for Serena... d'awwww! And then she woke up with her head on his chest and his arm around her and GAH, so cute! And then leaping through the trees and being carried bridal-style... This was such a fluffy chapter, I love it! :3

Munna. Dream World. Dream Energy... That's such a cool name for it! DREAM ENERGY. Hey, I wonder if Dream has a capacity of Dream Energy. Like, there's a limit of what he can use in a day. If he uses up all the Dream Energy for that day, he can't use his special powehz until he goes to sleep and recharges, which explains his heavy sleeping. ;P

Ohmaaaiigaaawwwshhh, that ending, though! The mysterious figure, those strange black, rippling circles, and Dream's gonna prove he's a hero, and... wow, so much is happening. :o The figure in the cloak, though... Ehe, Dream and Serena were talking earlier about if there's another Pokemon with Dream's abilities, and Dream said he'd like to compete with someone like that. Foreshadowing! Same thing sorta happened with Dream mentioning he wanted to become a hero, and then everything with the dream and the cloaked figure and stuff happened, and the opportunity totally presented itself. Nice. :3

"Whoa, you two are sure getting friendly." Pfft, oh Ruby. That was funny. xD Oh, and she's adopted? Huh... I wonder if her original parents show up in the future. That'd be an interesting confrontation. o.o

*Stares at Ryan and Ruby* Ryan and Ruby hanging in a tree, K-I-S-S-I-N-G! Or so I wish. xD Aha, and I guess you could call the end of this chapter... a TREEHANGER... no? Okay, I'll show myself out now. *Opens door, but then leaps out of window*

Hello there! I checked my e-mail and saw you updated this story. I've been wanting to read your stories ever since I Team Eviolite was in that one other with... uh... I can't seem to remember who and what the story is... Hmm... Well, right now my brain is saying it was the story with Team Wildfire and I think it has Darkrai kidnapping a human girl named Alex... I just can't seem to remember what the title was and who made it... And also, why did you delete the last one?

Anyways, I read this since, it was just recently updated and if Time Shock is going to updated then I'll finally read the first book and then that one. You see, to me, reading a series stories that are sequels and prequels of each other that I don't know if it was on hiatus or when it's going to be updated, kinda ruins the flow and my hype for reading it.

Now, I that doesn't mean I'm pressuring you to update Time Shock right now. A writer who writes without pressure will lead to better updates. At least that's how I see it.

Okay, to the actual review... Over all, the story is great. I don't have a favorite scene, and character, because I kinda like every single one of them. Yes, including the bad ones. And when I saw a WoftP reference I was happy. Really, I read both books, they were amazing. And having what happened was altered, kinda make sense, since some things there are better kept a secret. And oh, it can also spoil the whole story for readers, that too.

As for questions... well, I have a few.

To Dream's and Serena's Parents, Q: Are you guys going to make an arrange marriage for those two? Yeah, sorry about that. I'm kinda tired when I wrote this... Don't tell Dream and Serena btw, it might makes things awkward for them...

To Eve, Q: How many times did you hurt/seriously injured SP? I'm kinda curios because of a record being mentioned... And yes, I'm actually asking you here since I'm not reading your books yet... Um, you're not going all Luxray on me and hurt me are you? I think I better hide after I send this just in case...

To Dream, Serena, Ryan, and Ruby, Q: Do any of you have uh... how should I say this for the kids... "experimental" thoughts to your respective crushes? And is it okay for calling your group Team Dreamers for now? It makes things easier since all of you are almost always together like team.

And finally, to the author himself, Q: Are you on hiatus to Time Shock? I don't know what you're update schedule is or whether you have one. And seeing it on stand still for now, I decided to ask.

I guess, that's it... I'll ask again in the next update if I have more...

So, that's all of it then. Now to end this off. Keep up the great work and I can't wait for your future updates. Byez!

Sorry I forgot to insert my name! :D that is me, the one that says guest. I
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Just finished reading :D loved it! I love the concept of using the dream world for a possible reason of Dream's powers! And I love sonic colors(I downloaded reach for the stars from the game) I'll review sometime later and make some questions cuase I have non. Great creativity and style. Have a wonderful day :3

Well things have certainly gotten interesting. I for one cannot wait for the next chapter. I'm extremely curious about that robed figure, as well as the unknown person at the beginning of the chapter. I have a theory that they're connected somehow. Okay so questions... hm.

1) This here's for Dream. What do you look for in a friend?
2) Alright Serena this is for you. What is your favorite pass time?
3) Ruby this here is your question. What do you like most about your friends... Ryan in particular?
4) And this is for Ryan. If you could prank anyone in the world who would you prank?

And as for weird stuff... well maybe Dream could imagine up a small scale model of the town in which he lives... I guess. Oh and Ruby should draw, or paint the first thing that comes to her mind. Anyways that's all I've got for you at the moment. Can't wait for the next chapter to be updated.