Reviews for Who You Want To Be
Azucar chapter 1 . 6/29/2014
Oh that was painful. I skimmed the rest of it after Tony walks her to the door ...ouch...tooo much pain...yes Tony survived but what a gutwrenching future and 'Becca will always know she is second best...no thank you - I want happiness for them together and although ur writing was good Im devestated at this loss. Ziva was wrong to wait so long to realize she needed him.

Sugar
ONE SAD GUEST chapter 1 . 2/23/2014
This was a very sad story - in many respects.
Just one more time showing Ziva can not have or does not deserve some happiness in her life.
No one expects Tony to wait for her. Hell - he never said he loved her.
He was likely with someone a week after returning from Israel.
Gibbs no longer has any say in Zivas life - he is a cold hearted miserable man and I have little respect for his opinion. OOPS maybe I am mixing Gibbs up with Mark Harmon. Sorry.
guest chapter 1 . 2/22/2014
I understand why you had ten years elapse, Tony couldn't have a family otherwise, however, it is completely unrealistic and OCC of Ziva to wait ten years to come back and expect him to have waited that long.
bettertoflee chapter 1 . 2/22/2014
Touching story :) I enjoyed it, though I did leave feeling very sad. Ten years is a loooong time. I've been really missing TIVA lately.
Good job; hope you add more. Please don't let them cheat though :(
nando2k50 chapter 1 . 2/22/2014
Ten years, seriously?

I am not a big Ziva fan but come on, 10 years?

Good for Tony.
gibblette chapter 1 . 2/22/2014
Good for Tony not waiting around for her to decide to come back. He deserved to move on to a happy life. Poor Gibbs. Wish he had found happiness too.
bnlove chapter 1 . 2/22/2014
ughhhhh. that killed me. so sad. good job!