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Very cute and sweet!

So Sad And Happy.

:') FOREVER BEAUTIFUL! (':

Not bad. I noted a few spelling and capitalization problems but that was about it. Maybe take a few more proofreads through before you post and that should cover things. I liked the Naruo/Hanabi relationship/friendship.

Reported for underage relationships. Goodbye.

I love this! Hanabi is really cannon and so is Naruto. Nice way of sticking to it!

Forgive me if I write something incoherent (been up since 3:45 this morning-yeah, that shift). Overall, I liked it. I think the one thing that gets me (even though I always overlooked it before) is the age difference between Naruto and Hanabi. I think it would have been better if they had been adults for this whole shindig that you wrote out, but that's just me (and you're staying close to canon, which is good). I like making things work. Anyway, good job!

and you say you're not one for valentines' day this feels like an honest story

another terrible story by you, not surprised