| Reviews for Changes in Love |
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   Darkylos chapter 1 . 9/30 It disgusts me that people ship percy with maiden goddess jeez... |
| Guest chapter 4 . 5/1/2017 This story is good but I really don't like the fact that Artemis got raped. It just ruined the story for me. I know the world is not always nice and there won't always be a knight in shining armor or a hero to come save the the day but seriously raping and then not much of a reaction after that? Ruined. If you are planning on continuing this story please do a rewrite. It was good at the start. Peace out |
| 0TakaT0 chapter 4 . 10/9/2016 plz updat gonna make artemis pregnant? if u r plz dont. ty |
| Chaos the creator's cat chapter 4 . 8/9/2016 Wtf |
| PERCYJACKSONFAN1 chapter 2 . 5/10/2016 DUDE I CANT BELIEVE YOU! IF YOU CALL YOURSELF A PERCY JACKSON FAN, YOU ARENT! I MEAN SERIOUSLY, YOU SHOULD KNOW THE SIMPLE STUFF! GROVER ISNT AFRICAN AMERICAN! ALL REAL PERCY JACKSON FANS DONT USE THE STUFF FROM MOVIES BECAUSE WE KNOW ITS FAKE! IF YOU WERE A REAL PERCY JACKSON FAN YOU WOULD HAVE PAID ATTENTION TO GROVER! YOU FUCKING SUCK, ASSHOLE! |
| Guest chapter 4 . 3/14/2016 Changes in love |
| Miltonius chapter 3 . 2/25/2016 They could find remnants of the drug in artemis' system. They could find the drug in Orio's house have it match wat wa use on artems making a compelling case. |
| Guest chapter 3 . 12/29/2015 a rape victim should go to a hospital where they'd call the police and preserve the evidence, instead of take a shower and wash away the evidence. |
| Raahee chapter 3 . 11/22/2015 Good story. Keep up the good work |
| Guest chapter 3 . 10/24/2015 I think its a good story but you know that flaming is when somebody writes this story is an epic fail, right? |
| Guest chapter 3 . 10/16/2015 This is a very good it so far keep continuing it |
| BossMan1a22 chapter 3 . 7/18/2015 I'm sad that you discontinued this I was really loving the story I wish you would at least give some closure. |
| Guest chapter 3 . 5/30/2015 I don't know how people react to being raped, I thankfully, have never experienced it. However I would expect percy to be, umm angrier at Orion. And also Artemis hasn't really reacted at all, other that becoming shy. |
| Pertemis chapter 1 . 5/24/2015 Navy? Air-force? Coincidence much? |
| TheLastInspiration chapter 3 . 4/22/2015 Hmm. To be honest my main concern with this chapter is that I feel Artemis's response is too... non-nonchalant. She got raped, and she is still able to go to school? I think that is a bit unrealistic. For the next chapter you should write from Artemis's perspective, there hasn't been much character development for her. And I think you should get her to have a panic attack at school, where she finally realises the severity of what happened to her. To be honest this chapter wasn't the best, but I want to read this through. Come on. You can fix it up and do better :) Just believe in yourself. I'm gonna follow your progress for this story and offer you some advice in reviews if I can. |
