This how my fanfics go in my head. No descriptions, just dialogue. Thanks for posting this!

Sokka and Zuko were very much in character! Bravo!

This is absolutely gorgeous! I was a little wary of the all dialogue thing (although I must admit I've written a couple myself, but I've never known a successful one to go this long (before now)) but you pulled it off completely! It's really well done, and completely in character. You make sure that we know who's talking at every moment, which is impressive without any markers, and you do it perfectly.

This was great.

Loved it!

I loved it.

"All hail the schedule, then." What is it about Zuko's dryness that makes me giggle so much? Maybe it's because we don't see it in canon but feels so perfectly in character. I don't know.

I can actually see this happening. Pretty good. :)

This was very fun to read. All that backtalking and banter was very entertaining plus you kept them in-character which is always good in my book.

Aww, cool! Their friendly banter is nice, kinda acting like regular sixteen year olds. Awesome!

Thanks for posting this it was a fun read. I chuckled many times. Especially when Zuko talked about his father riding from the lava to haunt him. I tried to bring the dialogue to life by picturing the voice acting. The story flowed so well and covered s variety of topics. It was fun to see where everything- minus Zuko' s Agni Kai story- fit. What's ironic is that under the story page there is an advertisement that says Have the Talk of a Lifetime. Ah the wonders of technology. Thanks again.

-Kittyhawk09

That was incredibly sweet and funny. I loved every word. I could easily tell whose line was whose and the setting. A job well done my friend. :)

Terrific dialogue! It pretty much covers everything. Strangely enough, just having the dialogue works. I guess it is because the characters are so familiar that I can imagine what they are doing and add inflection where needed.

Aw, male bonding. I can see those two getting into all kinds of trouble together. Maybe throw in some Piandao for good measure (I like to imagine that Piandao is as much a magnet for trouble as Sokka and Zuko).