this is brilliant. i really enjoyed it. keep up the good work

Great story, just one thing, his name is spelt Rath. I used to think it was spelt Wrath or Wraith so don't feel bad. _;

Armand

Wrath

Rhapses

Amenhotep

Jakal

Nefertina

Arak

Kemaas

I think you got Heca right... not sure. I can never see that when the cast goes by.

I have the movie, so I included Kemaas in there. Good story though

Fantastic! Hopefully, this isn't the ending.

I think your bits of the past and the bits of the past given in the 'Mummies Alive!' cooperate very nicely to form a picture of what was going on back then. You constantly said you were inventing a lot of things, but that's what writing fanfics is all about. The style of your writeing is high quality. You were able to keep each of the mummies in-character, and that was pleasing as well. Overall, a very good work. I can't think of anything i've found wrong with it, aside from a few gramatical errors, but I have yet to see one story that dosen't. Keep it up.

-The Angelic

loved it! it is a very interseting outlook on how the gaurdians spent their last night alive, not realizing their fate.

SUGOI! Really cool story! I love where you're going with this! Please say you'll continue!