While the pacing was kinda fast for this Story, it fitted very well.
Everything just seems to flow naturaly and These two are so adorable!

I love epistolary fiction, so I'm pleased to be reading this. I think you mean customers, not costumers (people who make costumes). Big difference!

Make a sequel! I want to know what happens next. :)

Mycroft, oh Mycroft. Can't he care for his brother normally? Thank you for tying the first episode of Sherlock into the story! We were allowed into John's mind for the first episode. I would love to read a sequel to this. A job well done :)

Hard to believe John got to NSY and didn't end up meeting Sherlock. With one phone call Sherlock could've figured out John's whereabouts. The dialog between Donovan and John made me twitch with anticipation :) I'm sure Sherlock woud've run right out of there once he heard 'a man', and 'muscle' at least out of curiosity.
I'm surprised you could get chapters written in that kind of situation! Keep up the work.

I'm happy for John. Seems he found him finally. I like that his job at the surgery comes before his offical meeting with Sherlock. Different but good.

So sad Sherlock. He shouldn't jump to conclusions. Kinda funny how John bypassed the whole
'friend' thing :)

Aww poor Sherlock. Heartbroken? Already? It seems the story is beginning to tie into the series :) I love it when authors do that!

Uh oh! I hope John will be alright. I think if you describe the scenes more it would really make the story come to life.

Oooo. We're stepping into psyche of Sherlock now :) Only a few letters and Sherlock is already having 'feelings' toward John? hmmmm...

Funny chapter. Seems a romantic development is budding :)

Seems as if we're given the writer's thoughts and John's thoughts together in the beginning. Everyone who writes will be distracted by life, it happens :)

Steady development. Don't worry too much about the updates. Everyone struggles, especially with a full schedule!

You've captured John's curiosity. He just can't resist someone as interesting as Sherlock!

This actually seems like something Sherlock would do :) Sherlock just wouldn't be Sherlock without his crude personality!