Hello I just read this today but I thought this was good. If you want to start a new. That's uo to you but if you can could you try to continue this version if posible. I'd hate to see it just stop where it is. Even though it could be fixed.

I would have preferred Sachi still being alive but tragedy is OK.

I see from the reviews that this has been said already, but the blocks of text were very discouraging to me. I personally wouldn't wanted to read something like this and I would love to send a proper review once it's reformatted, but for now, my eyes hurt from looking at it.

please continue from the abyss. please and thank you

By an instant was definitely my favorite one because it left me with the most questions. Mainly what is going to happen next. Ik this is past the review date but I hope you'll consider it. I liked all 3 so it was a tough decision. :)

I like the Sachi/kirito one best. Then the lisbeth/kirito one was a close second. As for the asuna/kirito one I just didn't like it. Something seemed off. Thanks for the amazing story and I hope you continue and update soon.

I just found this story do I hope my vote counts. I like the first story with Sachi and kirito. I think it will be interesting to see how thing play out. Will he be forgiven? Will he be able to forgive himself? Will he run once they find him? And finally what will happen next? All important questions that must be answered. Thank you.

Loved the Lisbeth the best. Great job!

Real good one. I love the ones where sachi doesnt die. Keep this one up!

Well it's a tough choice. But I have to place my vote for the second one, Crossing Paths.

Definitely hope you'll expand on Crossing Paths as your early establishment of the Kirito/Asuna relationship gives plenty of room to exhibit their love/devotion/sacrifice for one another. Also, the cliffhanger you left regarding the Kuradeel incident witnessed by Asuna and Klein allows the possiblity for the story to be expanded on the crusade against the Laughing Coffin which would seem interesting! Although, my qualm with chap2 is that it seems more poorly fleshed/planned out which makes it a lot less pleasing to read. If a rewrite of this chapter was possible, i'd definitely recommend it as the writing method/format(?) really doesnt do your writing skills justicech

I vote for story number two: Crossing Paths

You know, ALL of these stories are good, but by process of elimination...I think I gotta say not the third story. It's a great idea, don't get me wrong; I'm itching to see what happens next. But that cliffhangar is the sole reason I would want to see it continued; I'm just not a fan of dark stories. The second story, though it might be my favorite, (as explained by my anonymous review) I just don't see going very far. So that leaves the first one; though I never quite became a fan of the moonlit black cats, that one is the most intriguing. Anyway, whatever the story is that you continue, I'm looking forward to the next chapter!

Not much in the summary section yet. I suppose even Lisbeth should have a chance with Kirito and there would be no other way for her to have a chance unless the other main romantic entanglements died. I'm surprised you didn't put in a scene where Silica dies after being taken hostage by a member of Titan's Hand. That would have made Kirito even more tragic.

AsuKiriSachi Please!