I admittedly didn't feel as much for this oneshot as I felt it should, and after awhile, I realized why - the second section feels tacked on IMO. While it does have a bookend feel, IMO, "do you want to build a snowman?" is a stronger ending than "Tell Olaf I said hi." That, and the primary drive of the piece is the relationship between Elsa and Anna, while Olaf is never mentioned up to this point.

But that aside, looking at it objectively, it's a good piece. Paced well, depicted well, and the use of the lyrics is well done.

Such a short, simple story, but I am crying all the same.
Thank you for my daily dose of feels. TT_TT

Why did you have to write this? WHY DO YOU HAVE TO CRUSH MY HEART? *sobs* This is sooooo beautiful! xx

Stay strong... dont cry, dont cry, honestly that is the most moving thing i've ever read, well done, you've succeded in making me cry all over my tablet, i hope you're happy!