You are such an amazing writer Your ability to arrange words rendered me speechless. I can picture every movement and hear every words that the characters said. You also able to make me laugh and cry along with the characters *bows* I thank you for the nice and wonderful ride lady, and I hope you will make a new one soon. The last chapter is one of my favorites! would you please make a sequel? teehee now I can't stop imagining Ashe in Cindy's outfit XD *drools*

I LOVE IT! The idea of Ashe and Balthier switching roles is brilliant. May I suggest you make this a stand-alone story and continue it.

Wonderful as always, Al!

Owww, this is an emotional roller coaster x3.
I love the prompt of Rozarrian language, because the spanish is my birth idiom and reading it mixed with english is very funny xD.
Well, i'm not very good writing english since i change it for the french D:, but i think you understood me.
Thank you for this precious fic, and if you think in prompts with more "spanglish" i'll be here to read and laugh a lot :D.
Have a good day x3.

Absolutely beautiful! Your chapters are always well worth the wait. I hope to see more soon, great job!

Love this but a shame that they must hide their relationship. Here's hoping for a happy ending to your tales! :-)

A beautifully written chapter and great addition to your story, I loved it!

Ahhhhh! How come every prompt you write is just amazing?! I adored this one, it hurt but was so well written I can't help but wait eagerly for the next!

Oh no! Please say it isn't so and that Balthier will return! Another great chapter to your one-shots! :-)

This can't be it? I hope you plan on rectifying this chapter on the next one. I've read fics with their own versions of Balthier and Ashe not being together but I really thought this was different. So I hope you will change it in the next chapter.

Beautifully written! Looking forward to the next!

I remember this one from Tumblr!

So many Ashe emotions! My fav queen... I loved this chapter! It's my favorite so far!

Vaan's interruption reminded me a lot of C-3PO's interruptions in Star Wars

Okay, this chapter hurts because it leaves you wondering if he's really dead or just pretending and either way hurts because it leaves them apart...