Okay read the CaptainSwan first because I am SwanFire and I saved that one for last not realizing there was some story before the cut off point for the two different ends.

I love both ends I thought they were well done, especially the part of Graham's wolf showing the way.

So will your next story be "if Baelfire went through the time portal with Emma instead of Hook" ? I been waiting for you to write that one since you finish writing "Back in Time" in that week between the third to the last episode and the two part season final. I know others since then had started their own version but I alway thought that you would be the best person for the job. ; )

Sorry to brother you but there is something wrong here.
I do appraise the thank-you page.
I look forward to your next story.

Preferred this ending. If you hadn't done a CS one I would have been fuming.

I didn't read the Neal/Baelfire ending cause I do not like him, but this was an excellent story :)

I loved the Cs ending so sweet. I found the name Graham cause he saved both their parents

You poor thing, I glad you are feeling better.
This was a great chapter, you are one of the best writers on here.

So I have an question ever since you ending Finding Baelfire with the special thank-you page: so you can see who is following the story but not the ones who have favorite your story?

CaptainSwan ending, please!

So... is this CaptainSwan or Swanfire? Because I was wondering where the hey Hook has gone. Him and Emma are perfect together, and he is now gone? (I secretly ship CaptainSwan, can't you tell? :)

Excellent chapter! Everyone is okay, the Wicked Witch is gone, and everyone remembers! I can't wait to read about the wedding!

Great teaser but it is half-sister not step-sister.

Why would Zelena be able to take Emma's heart? It goes against everything the show has shown us.

If it's Swanfire, you need to link their names together instead of leading people who ship Captain Swan on. Or you should have stated nearer the beginning what pairing it would be. I really do not like Swannfire, nor do I like Neal, but I respect him in ways.

I would like an alternate Cs ending

Great Neal doesn't remember. I hope he gets his memories back soon! At least Emma is being honest with him. This chapter was good but I noticed a spelling error: some for sum and a grammar error somewhere.

This story is pretty good so far and I am liking how this story is going so far. It sounds like you are leaning towards Swanfire so far and while I am happy (I am a swanfire fan though I don't know if you are simply toying with us). I hope you keep yourself consistent about what you are hinting at and keep true to what you are writing for this story. (Pretty much don't let other fans scare you off from the path you currently walking down upon as you write this story)