This is wonderful and adorable! You got them just right, good work!

OH MY GOSH IT'S SO CUTE STOP. Seriously though, I LOVE this! You capture their characters perfectly! I love the way you write them! Their voices are so clear in the writing. Which is beautiful, by the way. Anyway, just wanted to gush about how much I loved this, since it's so hard to find a good portrayal of a Shepard/Thane romance that I've like. Fantastic job! I would love to see you write more of them.

This was really cute and sweet. Good job on keeping Thane in character too. Your grammar is good too; which is always a plus. :)

Aaaaaand I just spat soup all over a restaurant table. Loved it!

Opethia

This was so cute.

D'aw, this was cute! :D

Changed the dream at the beginning, huh? XD That's a-okay, nobody needs more of that kid. XD

And: HNNNNNNGHGHGHGHGHG;DFJLGHDGHSLKDSFHLKSHGKDF. THANE.

This was adorably endearing. I'm a sucker for Shrios fics, but this had a sweetness to it that most lack. Good job :D