| Reviews for Blue Team |
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Ghost of Los Angeles chapter 8 . 1/5/2018 Do you still have your plot file if so can you please PM it to me or email it to me at |
theta117 chapter 8 . 6/29/2016 Get a co author |
wheelbobby chapter 8 . 12/10/2015 Don't remove the story. just change the summary to add this information. |
Guest chapter 8 . 8/14/2015 Such a great story. Such a shame it had to be discontinued. |
Tobi chapter 8 . 4/6/2015 In my opinion you should leave this story up b/c it could inspire people to make their own similar fanfiction. Or crossover like it did with me. It's well written and could be a good referencing point. Plus I know I like to occasionally re-read stories like this so others might as well. |
Tobi chapter 8 . 4/6/2015 Thank you for you permission to use similar ideas from this in our own stories I was thinking of doing a RWBY and Halo crossover and liked some of your ideas. Thank you also for being upfront and admitting you weren't continuing and getting hopes up. I wish you luck if any future fanfic endeavors. |
Guest chapter 8 . 2/18/2015 You see the thing is story's like this never die they're just missing in action |
Sad Man Is Sad chapter 8 . 1/9/2015 :( |
Guest chapter 8 . 1/3/2015 Can't you rewrite the story |
Maverickdm chapter 8 . 1/4/2015 aww that sucks I really liked this story it was a one of a kind story that I see nothing else well yeah I see ones with the chief and arbiter but not the blue team of the spartan II program (yes I said that DONT JUDGE) I really hope you make a rewrite I saw some mistakes but not a lot also I'm not that kind of person to point out every single mistake you make |
gagelange10 chapter 8 . 1/2/2015 Hmm, I see. I just wish you would keep it up instead of taking it down. I would love to go through and re-read the story. |
James Ryan chapter 8 . 1/2/2015 *Light of Aiden plays in the background* |
Bingo887 chapter 8 . 1/2/2015 You are a criminal. It is such a shame to see you give up so easily. You have potential to be a great story teller. I understand tho. When things get to tough, quit. The only logical thing to do. However, don't you dare take this down. Leave it up and who know, someone might be able to do what you couldn't...finish this story. It was great reading your work and I wish you a happy new year. |
Kifo Sotri chapter 8 . 1/2/2015 It is unfortunate that you have abandoned this story, as it is a very interesting premise and your writing style helped to properly flesh out the perspectives. I hope that you some day decide to rewrite this story, continue it, or show it to another author who could do the same. You made something good here, and it saddens me to see it discontinued, but I hope your other projects continue to bring inspiration. |
123GOHANZ chapter 8 . 1/2/2015 I can understand. Felt the same thing once. |