Loved this.

OMG OMG OMG OMG I cried like three times! I think I've read this story before, but it's like it's all new to me if I did! XD OMG... fourhundredthousandbillion stars out of ten!

Very good. I wish it would continue

This pairing is really beginning to grow on me, unusual though it is. Onslaught's frustration at not being able to help his lover was heart-wrenching, as were the twins' "last words" to each other. I was so relieved when I realised they all would live and have the chance of a future together. And, as Onslaught says, Bruticus fighting for the Autobots instead of against them is likely to do quite a bit of difference. You'd better run, Megatron...

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I was a mess of emotions.

Sad, worried, and I was crying at one point.

This is splendid writing here . . . oh my heart-the end had me grinning from ear to ear.

*grins like a loon as you feed my love for these two* I was close to tears reading, despite the fact that I had read this when you finished it, and in spite of knowing the outcome I was still biting my nails as Megatron attacked Sideswipe.

Despite the pain in my heart, I have so much love for this, so much love 3 Angst and fluff, (our favourite genre for these pairings ), what more can I ask for!? Thank you for writing :3