Reviews for The Edge of Breaking
kittygamerplays chapter 15 . 4/23
this is a very lovely story and the end was perfect... how he smiled at his reflection... damn im tearing up the growth was wonderful and how jack and Aster learned to grow as people and as lovers is just gorgeous.
Demi clayton chapter 15 . 7/13/2019
I think you should write a one where Jack Frost is in love with the Easter bunny , when he first see,s he as that whayed be very funny yet sweet as well. When you can. Please and thank you.
North of the North chapter 15 . 5/27/2019
Awwww
LordyLorLor chapter 15 . 10/13/2018
Omg. I love this story so much. There's so much going on, even if there's only 15 chapters and a few of these made me cry a little, especially when the two kids died because Jack was forced to make a blizzard. I SUPPORT.
NotTheRedhead chapter 15 . 8/13/2017
This story was amazing, really interesting.
Peanut Butter Rules chapter 15 . 4/27/2017
This ending is so beautiful! I'm crying so hard right now.
izzyru chapter 15 . 11/24/2016
I'm very curious as to a story similar to this one where Jack got with Rime (I believe that's your OC's name)...
03ECollins chapter 1 . 10/14/2016
It was a bad move to read this in public... I've practically spent the whole time crying, not subtle tears either! I love this book so much! You are an amazing writer who knows exactly how to pluck at my heartstrings! I'm so happy right now but I'm still crying so much!
Mystera II chapter 15 . 9/7/2016
Well ... I think it's finally time to Review.
Should have done it after reading the first of your stories, but reading th next one and than the ext one seemed so much better.
Sorry, seems like I got a bit addicted.
Your stories had quite the Jack-effect on me. Filling me with pure joy. (Well maybe not Baby Tooth dying or that whole Pitch-abuses-Jack-Thing you had going in this Story.)

But now I finished all of them and want to sa thank you for sharing your immagination with us. I hope there will be more to come. There just cannot be enough Jackrabbit/Snowbunny in the world.

~Tera
MyRealNameIsTaken chapter 15 . 8/21/2016
I read the rest of this story on my mobile so I didn't comment (it's slow as shit). I really enjoyed this story though :)
MyRealNameIsTaken chapter 6 . 8/20/2016
Omg yes Phil and jack time, loving it :)
Is the hummingbird the reason Jack feels uncomfortable around Tooth Fairies?
MyRealNameIsTaken chapter 5 . 8/20/2016
That's so sneaky, putting nightmare sand in the cloak. And yay, Sandy is figuring it out :)
MyRealNameIsTaken chapter 4 . 8/20/2016
My brains can't think of anything to say, because I want to comment on so many things in this chapter but every time I want to type it, it just flies away. I loved this chapter though. BUT WHY DOES JACK SAY HE WANTS TO GO BACK!?
MyRealNameIsTaken chapter 2 . 8/20/2016
Who's Rime though? I'd love to read more about him/her in the future :)
And oh, it's so sad that Jack couldn't fly, must be hard for him ):
MyRealNameIsTaken chapter 1 . 8/20/2016
Again, I'm loving the past and the present thingy :)
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