Reviews for Remnant
Guest chapter 21 . 8/8
Please update again soon it's such a great story
ViccoVicious chapter 21 . 7/21
LOVE! You are an amazing writer. I've really enjoyed housekeeping and remnant. Hope you're still writing. I'd like to read. more from you.
blorb chapter 21 . 7/12
I can’t wait for the next chapter of their messily emotional and engaging story. It looks like most readers here that complain are, in my opinion, picky. Your characters are beautiful and aren’t 2D, the different parts of their personalities colliding messily which only make it more believable. I’m sure most of your readers would love another chapter, so don’t listen to the naysayers.

I’m following, and ultimately updating is up to you, but trust that you’ll be welcomed back happily.
mancer chapter 21 . 7/7
People are seriously getting pissed because the author on an fanfiction site is sticking with canonverse? Really? Jeez, go read a book, if you want an all original story. The nerve of some people.

Also, it's time for a bit of my annual spamming - I really really love your stories and it would mean a lot to me (and I believe I speak for most of us) if you could find a time to continue writing these brilliant stories in the future.

I hope you're doing well and some of these reviews won't discourage you from writing more. We love you!
Durinsdottir chapter 20 . 7/4
I just saw a few longggg reviews by readers and I'm so confused how they couldn't love this? To each their own and everyone can interpret literature differently, but as a fellow writer, I have to totally disagree with their points. Like they're mad that characters can have complex emotions and interpersonal connections? That life is messy af? And people are messy af? SMH.

I LOVE Jane and all her flaws and bad decisions and honestly, if you're in the Joker's good graces and possibly feeling some feelings for him... You GOTTA have some bad decisions being made hahah!And I find it totally believable how her life spiraled downwards. She was young and in love and Eric led her down a shady abusive path. It's a typical abusive tactic to cut the victim off from their family, gaslight them into staying and thinking they don't deserve better. Doesn't matter if her family was well off- she wasn't and clearly it was difficult for her to face them and admit how badly her life went.

Also, I don't mind that you've followed canon so far. This is fanfiction, it doesn't HAVE to veer off to be good. I think it'd be OOC for Joker to drop everything and listen to Jane, and honestly, that moment where he considered it was pretty big.

Please don't be discouraged! This is amazing and I'm loving every subtle bit of interaction between the two! For real, you could drop them into a zombie apocalypse and I'd be down LOL. Suspension of disbelieve- bah! If they like superhero movies/ comics, it's already a given! You're tackling serious issues like abuse, poverty, psychological damage, ect and grounding them in a comic world and it's so well done! I know there's so many more readers that love this story and are hoping you keep going! No matter what the wait, I'll be here! xoxoxox
Durinsdottir chapter 21 . 7/4
God I hope you continue! I just reread Housekeeping and caught up with this story and omg! The way you write is so compelling, how you characterize the Joker and how believably that Jane is drawn to him and yet doesn't justify his actions. She's not lovestruck and blind but very much like a zoologist interacting with a strange dangerous creature.

I'm so curious where you planned to go with this- involving Harley and Strange and keeping Jane within the Joker's sphere. God, I can imagine so many wrong scenarios happening in Arkham and if this follows into the third movie... the inmates are gonna be sprung... I wonder if he'll take her up on her offer to get away from it all.

In the meantime, I wonder when they'll see each other again. If they'll end up in the same room in therapy. Will she still leave for Metropolis on the 22nd? I doubt it but I hope she lets her family know what she's doing, that she might get closure from the sessions and she can't pretend like it never happened.

I love this SO MUCH and hope you update! Take care!
lailaisdumb2 chapter 21 . 6/30
i need an update so bad please
lailaisdumb2 chapter 18 . 6/29
HARLEY?
lailaisdumb2 chapter 13 . 6/25
WHAT AHEGKQBSKSNDHDBSK
lailaisdumb2 chapter 7 . 6/23
bruh he left
lailaisdumb2 chapter 4 . 6/22
MATT IS SO FUNNY HAHA
lailaisdumb2 chapter 1 . 6/22
henry a bad bitch
Dryvvad chapter 21 . 6/19
After reading I find myself agreeing with another reviewer Rinne Koe. I wish I had read her review before continuing to read so that I wouldn’t be left disappointed for the wasted time.

In this story we find that Jane isn’t the girl we are presented with in the first story ‘Housekeeper’. She comes from a wealthy family, has the most tolerant parents and unobtrusive sister and brother-in-law in the whole world (they never ask or say a word about her history with Joker without being concerned about the risk presented to them and their son, really?) but she acts very hard done by and as though she’s never known anything but living in the Narrows. She had so much given to her and she threw it away to marry an abusive a-hole who worked for the mob. In the story it is said she ran away to live out a fantasy life with her forbidden husband in the Narrows, but this ‘dream’ they supposedly had together is never explained. She came from wealth and every opportunity, what on earth was she hoping to find in the Narrows she couldn’t get anywhere else?

Also she has mob connections - just suddenly out of the blue - not just some average girl then right? She has connections with very prominent figures in the entire story - Gordon and Marcone and Wayne - but she does nothing and has no impact on the story.

As a side note, the part with her speaking with Marcone in the hospital confused me. You made it sound like Marcone had been sent to kill her on Falcones orders, which didn’t make sense - Marcone is a mob boss, he took over the crime family from Falcone - why on earth would he be running errands for the guy? Mob bosses don’t visit the girlfriend of a flunky they ‘dispatched’ to personally kill (or let go in this case).

When I read the penthouse scene my hopes for this story were dashed when I realized you weren’t going to have Jane have any sort of meaningful impact at all on events - just a bystander reiterating everything we know was going to happen. What’s the point of the story with this new character if she doesn’t do anything or change anything at all? I continued reading in the hopes changes would happen later on in the timeline.

There is no reasonable explanation given in this story or in Housekeeper about why she protects the Joker and his secrets. Her narrative suggests that she is terrified of him, yet she doesn’t turn him in to the police for the hotel murders, and she doesn’t tell Gordon anything even when she has the opportunity - though I fail to see how her interactions with Joker would have had any meaningful impact on his capture or arrest - like many characters in the story have suggested it would have. (Gordon said he already knew Joker had been the one to kill those people in the hotel? If he knew this the whole time then how was her sparse information valuable at all?)
She knew so little about him the police wouldn’t have been able to find or catch him anyway if he didn’t want to. Plus, what about the other people in the hotel - they saw him and his scars and would have easily recognized him on the tv after robbing the bank. They could have mentioned he had been at their hotel for a few months under the name ‘Jack Jay’ - alias or not. But again - what difference did this make?

So I finished this story deeply confused about the character Jane and what importance she has at all. She makes no impact on the story, yet the two important figure in the story - Batman and Gordon - all seem to think that if she had come forward (with info they already had) that Joker would have been stopped before he even started. Sure Jane has some stories about Jack smashing a mirror and smearing it with grease paint - but so what? Everyone already knows he is unstable and violent - he did a good job demonstrating that on his own.

And now Jane is having weekly meetings with Dr Strange in Arkham every week just to get a reaction out of Joker? Why? Also, she has yet another opportunity to spill about the random interactions she’s had with him, and yet she’s reluctant to say a thing - but is still terrified of Joker, yet happy he’s not ‘all gone’?

The story and characterization and plot and importance of the character are way overstated and requires absurd amounts of suspension of disbelief to keep the story from crumbling. Which is a huge disappointment because ‘Housekeeper’ had so much promise and Remnant just went off the rails out of any sort of narrative and plot flow readers should expect from a story.
Guest chapter 21 . 5/11
Just wanted to say I ABSOLUTELY LOVE this fanfiction, as well as “Housekeeping.” Your portrayal of Heath Ledger’s (bless his soul) Joker is OUTSTANDING and honestly the best I’ve read. Jane’s character draws the reader in, and her relationship with Jack is believable in the fact that Jane has been in previously abusive relationships (which is interesting because it provides a way for her to justify some of his behavior towards her). Overall, both “Housekeeping” and “Remnant” are AMAZING fanfics and I love coming back to them again and again! Keep up the great work!
Guest chapter 13 . 4/10
You know since now you’re probably stuck at home i think it would be a great time for you to update a new chapter
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