What a totally fun story! And super fascinating. What I really want to know are examples of the "slender build" dragon koopas that were mentioned in Chapter 2. And these winged Dragon Koopas! I wish to know who exemplifies THAT ability! So many fascinating things that I just want to know more about or where the info came from! It's SO TOTALLY COOL!

But my hunger for research aside, this was such a great story! Thank you so hyper much for writing it!

I liked it. And it makes sence. Thx for updating.

Thank you Iggy. Brilliant essay ! You have the potential to be a celebrity scientist some day. ( if your father would allow it). And you could prove your beaming experiment, that junior ruined, again with Lemmy now that he is healed and show them all. Go Iggs!

Hey, I read you oldest brother comfort. It made me curious about what if Ludwig went to another parallel universe where lemmy is the oldest instead. Ludwig experiences the issues that lemmy had to deal with of having the big responsibility?

Thank GOD you said they can't remove their shells! It bothers me when stories include removal of their shells.

As somebody with a lot of itnerest on biology matters, this kind of story always pique my curiosity. And lo and behold, this one has been pretty good!

Excellent job so far

Dear lord, this is using a shocking amount of real-life biology. As much as I dislike the subject, this report (not necessarily a story) interests me to no end.

While being formal and informative, you also manage to stay in Ludwig's character, making this educational AND entertaining! The fanon is well thought-out, and I wouldn't be surprised if Miyamoto were to knock on your Inbox and ask to make this official canon!

I can't wait to read more from you, keep it up!

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This is a very interesting concept of the widely unknown species! While everyone has their own opinions to this topic it is very interesting and I am hoping to read more.

Thank you Ludwig for your expmanation. Just make sure that this information remains only accessible to chosen individuals. If enemies know how important the shell is, they might attempt to destroy that instead the head or other parts.

Curious for next part.

Great job on the idea and the execution of it. I liked it. I hope Iggy does quite a job at explaining his part of it. :)

Yay, update! And poor Luddy... He should enjoy telling us about himself! :)

Iggy telling the next chapter... This should be funny!

What about those whose patarent is born either a pure dragon father or mother

Example: my oc Bowtail had bowser for father and hooktail for mother

Hey, sorry I'm replaying so late- I've been busy. But anyways, I like the storyline so far- you must continue this story! :)

Nice writing. Keep it going. Cant wait for the story you mentioned that is to come.

whoa great story, which i think it really cool