I wont lie it took me q bit to understand that misty was the main character for this chapter i honestly was thinking that rico was the one i had to pay attention to when i realized it was misty i had a mind blowing moment i love her personality for the most of the chapter i kinda wanted to cry when she almost killed the kid glad she didnt do an overall great chapter keep me on edge sense i didn't expect a lot of things i was expecting the opposite rly so ty its hard to find such a good story

Wow...Such a manipulative and brutal character. Definitely a character to be wary of. Though I have to be honest, I kinda saw it coming. Not to its full extent of course but something was definitely fishy from the start. After, it was...odd that someone so capable of handling so much of the zombie horde/having that much muscle mass not defend herself against a molester. Since I have a feeling that you created this scene in specific, I have to say: you did an amazing job on it. In a single chapter, you were able to express so much of Misty's personality/bitterness/past and that is not something not easily done. I can't wait to read the next chapter and meet Martha's savior!

P.S. When Misty first met Martha, you wrote that "Misty is our niece." (I think you meant Martha tho, right?)

P.S.S Hope your recovery is going well

Wow... that Misty is so cool! I wanna fight her! Also get well soon and as always update please!

Misty seems... badass? Yes Badass. Keep up the amazing work.

Misty Thyme eh . . . . . . . . interesting personality but what a sicko. I agree that Rico kind of deserved it for her molestation (but she shouldn't have killed him!) but what did poor Maxis do? And poor Martha! Sty is an interesting character but . . . . .. I don't really like her.

Good to see you return, Laz-kun! And I'm excited to see the battle! But you'll introduce Aaron before that, right?

Cool (and horrifying) chapter!

Oh wow... This was mind-blowing... O_O
Just as I was feeling sorry for Misty, she went off into 'crazy' mode... Definitely wasn't any of that coming... She seems violent but really strong too. Though I wonder what's going to happen to her battle with the stranger..

Still, I really liked reading the chapter, especially with the major shock factors XD Can't wait for the next update!

I'm just...shocked
I first I thought Misty was a in helpless little girl and then she came out like a monster. "Wow" I said, I had to read that part again to make sure I want just seeing things. Great job man I can't wait for more.

(Continued)
Offensive Skill Tree:
Strength: 5
Speed: 4
Agility: 8
Dexterity: 7
Reach: 3
Skill: 6
Jump: 2
Awareness: 6

Defensive Skill Tree:
Toughness: 5
Stamina: 7
Block: 5
Dodge: 4
Parry: 8
Elusiveness: 9
Luck: 3
Recovery: 6

1 Handed Light Stabbing: 8
1 Handed Medium Stabbing: 7
2 Handed Heavy Stabbing: 6
1 Handed Cleaving: 5
2 Handed Cleaving: 9
1 Handed Crushing: 3
2 Handed Crushing: 4
1 Handed Light Thrown: 5
2 Handed Heavy Thrown: 2

Battlefield Armor: Metal Armor plates on her chest and Metal Gloves (as long as her normal gloves)

Oh, almost forgot...

Reason why hatred: All she is focused on is surviving and she sees others as a threat to her survival. Roe also experienced two survivors killing her parents and that traumatized her not for the fact that the survivors were trying to survive but for the fact that they made her parents suffer. Ever since she has held a grudge against the other survivors.

I am very sorry for using two parts it was accidental. I hope you liked it :) I tried hard.

Name: Roe Kazane
Nickname: Kaza
Age: 15
Species: Human
Gender: Female
Sexuality: Straight
Height: 5' 2"
Weight: 110 lb.
Nationality: Japanese-American
Religious Beliefs: None
Skin Color: Peachy color
Eye Color: Green
Hair Color: Brunette with slight blond highlights
Hair Style: Long Ponytail with long side bang
Body Type: Slim but has simple curves and Medium sized breasts
Clothes: Red Tank top, Short white leather vest, Long black leather gloves, Black jean shorts, Combat Boots up to her knees, Spiky bracelet, Charm Necklace with a single red rose, a Gold hair tie to hold her hair, her nails are painted white, and Brass knuckles in her sweater vest pocket
Scars: A cross scar on her arm

History: Roe was always in her books and studying for her future but she also practiced Jujitsu. Just like in her studies, she was number one at the school level in Jujitsu and Roe hardly ever payed attention to her family. She loved her mother, father and little sister but she didn't quite fit in with them. Then came the outbreak. Roe was studying at the library when she heard students screaming. She ran outside to find discarded body pieces every where. Terrified, Roe ran back home and found her parents weren't home. She looked every where and found them, as zombies and her little sister was in their arms, dead. Running away, she found herself at a bridge over looking the city and saw multitudes of zombies running in her direction. She was able to run but got zombies attacking her along the way and one of them left her with a scar. Successfully she hid in an abandoned building and looked out the window, which overlooked the city. Roe knew she had to survive, for her future.

Personality: Somewhat shy but is very fierce when aggravated, usually very calm and collected but is very funny in a conserved way. But after the outbreak she secluded herself and she lost herself in her thoughts. Roe also turned very expression less and had panic attacks when she sees someone touching her scar.

Likes: Music, Reading, Animals, Anime, Chocolate, Candy
Dislikes: Vegetables, Huge crowds, Small spaces, Needles, Bees

Weapons: Katana (strapped to her waist ), Combat Blade in her boot and Electroshock gloves.
Fighting Style: She likes to interact and be up close in battle. Usually her favorite weapon is her Katana but she sneaks her other weapons when necessary. Roe seems to have an ability to disappear from your line of vision and appears when you least expect it. She uses this to her advantage.

Woooooow. Intense stuff. Talking zombie? Cool.

Okay so uh opinions huh…..

Dainty's a bit, I dunno. Emotional? She let her anger get the better of her and instead of escaping, she attacked the zombies. Bad bad bad. Even though she met that nice stranger. That'll probably make her die or something.

Zach is just…cool. Sorry, personal bias to talking zombies. He seems to have a sad past though, and I'll be interested in seeing more of him.

I like the concept of this story its new and I like it. Anyway I like the characters so far and cant wait to see more. I dont know whether to send you an OC or not I fear I'm abit late. Anyway update soon I look forward to seeing more.

Wow...this chapter explains his backstory so well...the action scenes and how all the characters reacted - absolutely wonderful! I can't wait to see the next chapter!

Keep up the great work! Until next time!

THAT WAS SO AWESOME! The whole fight scene gave me goosebumps! I want to fight this Zach dude so much! Even though there's a big chance my character will die on the spot! Anyway update next month!

This . . . . is . . . . . HOLY SHIT.

I have no idea how you do this Laz (can I call you that?) but I . . . I . . . Good grief! How do you write so well?! *.* I'm an official fan of you now.

And the fight scene . . . . it was . . . . it was . . . . so AWESOME! Zach seems like a really dangerous dude. I shouldn't like him, should I? But I already have a crush on him. Oh well.

Please continue writing. I'll die if I don't get a dose of your stories. You're an amazing author and I hope you always keep up the excellent work.

It's another mystery person! But wow... Zach was really amazing... He'd be a really strong opponent...
Your actions scenes are all really well written! Keep up the awesome work!