like the idea but the dialogue is contrived and sherlock i ooc

aww, I am a sucker for brotherly love fics, and in fact, other than Mycroft fics in general, it's really the only "Sherlock" fics I like to read. Wonderfully done, and I don't personally think any of them were OOC.

Aww :) Really loved it, that was quite good. Some parts were just ever so slightly ooc, but it's really alright, truly :) I just wanted to let you know that there was a bit of it, because I know I don't like it as an author when I think I've got something wrong but people insist it's perfect, you know? But truly, it didn't distract from the story, and I loved how it ended too :) Really really good; great job!

I love it! The best story I have ever read so far on fanfic! Love mycroft telling/sometimes humiliating sherlock in front of john. Unlike some other fanfics, I can actualy imagine the characters saying the things they did. Please carry it on!

I just love brotherly Mycroft... Lovely fanfiction

Wow! That's brilliant! I think you perfectly captured Mycroft's speech pattern. :D

This is the sweetest thing! I LOVE it!

Beautiful fanfiction ! Really loved it !

This is beautiful, I love it. Really encompasses the Holmes brothers' relationship. :)