You know, England could have easily translated it into spoken word before someone else wrote it down.

Okay, this is cute! Usually, I don't really like personified states, but you totally pull it off! Great job!

Aww that was cute,I loved it!

I love, love, love, love this. Oh goodness, what a wonderful headcanon!

I seriously think you are by far the best fanfiction writer to have written about the states. All of your state fanfics are the absolutely best of all the ones I have read so far ( and I have read aaaaalllooot) I really love your style of writing and how you make your ocs seem so real. I particularly fond of new York :)
His really cute in this story, I like how you've shifted off the course of the normal new York sterotype. You show Steven to be a new York STATE personification , while others ( other people who write state fanfictions )only depict their new York personification with the NYC Sterotype. It's a really lovely change and I can't wait to read more state stories from you
xD
Keep up the awesomeness , I'm rooting for you
\( * w * )/

Very sweet, wonderful job :)

This was really awesome and I love how you portrayed their relationship. The only thing is Hawaii and Alaska being physically 5. Hawaii was independent for a time, and Alaska is just "new" to america, not the world. Besides that it was great though.

Aw! so sweet! New York is such an interesting character... and is it weird that I (pretty much without meaning too) have begun to ship New York with Massachusetts? It probably started when Patrick extended hug in the hospital of Stars and Stripes. Now the ship just can't be stopped!
And Democracy! Heck yeah! Lol I love how that is like their catch phrase! Like just randomly at family gatherings someone yells "Democracy!" and everyone else no matter where they are in the house or what they are doing, stops a moment to send up a chorus of cheers and fist pumps before returning to what they were doing.

Super cute I love it
Please update soon :)