Thanks for a great read so far. Sorry you quit.

was going just fine until he went from 12 to 16...
I hate it when characters age up/ get a lot taller for no good reason.

So your not gonna update the story again what disrespect... smh

When can we expect you back to this story?

I don't know if it was a typo or not, but in case it wasn't, I wanted to point out a few things. First, the book is called The Princess Bride, not bridge. Secondly, I think you meant the he had not identified the ROUS in he swamp - not ROS.

Where is Scabbers?

Isn't it Sirius's motorcycle that Hagrid is riding?

Continue please

It's always amusing to see authors write "jumping in front of projectile" scenes. Like.. if it's slow enough for someone to just jump in front of it, why is it a problem in the first place? Do you even understand how long it would take for Remus to get his body moving, get close enough and far enough in to cover Harry's body with his own? Is that Avada Kedavra stuck in traffic on the way? Is it going a mile per hour? So dumb, and such a pointless death. Remus wasn't even built up as anything in this story, and now he dies to push plot and conflict.

Overall a pretty disappointing story.

Why the fuck would he pull a "prank" (read: something only a literal retard would do) by making the girl he likes go around basically naked at her fucking job? He's not a part of it. She could get fired. Her entire fucking social life at her job could get destroyed. It's ridiculously embarrassing and honestly could be pretty world ending for some people. Showing off the girl he likes to everyone but himself. There's literally no way she should ever goddamned speak to him again after something like that, no matter how easy going she may be. A prudish society like this magical one—they still wear robes and clothes that covers basically everything—and he does shit like that at her fucking job.

There's just so much wrong with this. Yes, I know it's just a throw-away bad fucking joke in a stupid story, but it reflects /a lot/ on the writer as a person; way more than it does on Harry the character. Completely destroying my immersion/enjoyment with your social ineptitude. So fucking dumb.

These magical vows are so fucking lame. You just solve every issue with "I AM TOTALLY TRUSTWORTHY GUYS, SO MOTE IT BEEEEEEEEEEE." It's disgusting.

This whole son/father way of addressing each other feels so out of place. It came out of nowhere and just doesn't suit their situation at all. SiriusPadfoot/Pup is way more intimate than Father/Son anyway. Very poor decision.

Left to say this story didn't think I would like but kept me intrigued with your story and I truly really got into it specially the last few chapters I have to say it saddens me that it's almost been four years since you've written anything on this story so I will say you probably stop writing for good I know life happens for you planning your life so for now I will say thank you for writing as always

Doing great, like the different view. Few spelling and grammar errors, but understandable. Need a good Bata to help with that. Looking forward to the next chapter.

and you've ruined it with a dumb growth spurt