Unfortunately, as a reader I do not like that he's monopolizing her. I understand you want to reunite then but it should be the other way around. Her rules, her flirtatious actions. Make her the strong one, taking control of her future. Her choice.

In you summary you said Bella was bitter she does not seem bitter to me. Same old Bella lets everyone treat her like carp and she is fine with it if it.

Beautiful I loved it it saddened my heart and yet the story remains romantic and tragic.

You... Are ... BRILLIANT... I think i must've cried about over 9000 When Charlie died, following Renesmee... I am so inspired by your creativity and talent. Personally... I think you made Twilight ALOT better than Stephenie Meyer... Please write more stories like this.. The Drama, the Angst, the Dry Humor, the Emotion, Family Dedication. And last but not least the Everlasting love between Bella Swan and Edward Cullen. When the Lion fell in love with Lamb... Like omg.. So beautiful! Tha k you so much for sharing such a beautiful story. From beginning, Middle, and End.

I think I never disliked Alice so much as I do right now in your story! But otherwise I love your story. I really hope that Bella will lose it with Alice and put her in her place ;)

Beautiful story. It made me think about how much I wish I could find true love.

Gah.
I know this story is old as hell at this point, but GAH! This was so well written. I adored every second.

This was an amazing story the best one I have ever read

This story wasted my time. In 5 chapters bella and edward could wed and adopt and all that stuff

I have been waiting for Steven's demise.

This is a fantastic story! I swear, I cried about a hundred times throughout the story. That's how powerful your words were!

You are a great fan fiction writer!

You are the best fan fiction writer I have ever seen. Thank you so much for this amazing story.

I CRIED. YOU MADE ME CRY. YOU MEAN. JK! IT WAS SOOOOO GOOD!

Awesome