That was sweet that Dart saved Tygris from being killed by Ragnarok. It was different seeing a chapter with only one himan character in it, but it was great!

I liked the level of detail you put into the explanation of how magic works. How no two equal magics can exist without trying to destroy each other. That was a really nice touch!

Great chapter! And cool idea having them remake a new set of cignets! Nice boss battle too, and it was awesome seeing Meru go Dragoon again!

It's cool reading this because I will always now see the Divine Dragon as Ragnarok, no matter how many times I play the game over. He's become an actual character to me now and if anything, it adds to my enjoyment of LOD in general. Thank you!

Meru! I'm so glad she's back! And I'm happy we didn't have to witness the deaths of Miranda and Kongol. Hopefully they lived the rest of their lives in peace and died with love all around them. Sooo happy to see Meru and Guaraha again though!

I love how you describe your scenery. I felt like I was able to visualize everything clearly. I wonder what Embren is up to following Dart like that. This is a great story so far!

That was an awesome battle at the end there! Imagining someone else wearing Rose's armor does seem weird, doesn't it? I know this is an old fic and you've long since moved on from it but I'm very happy to finally get the chance to read it!

I really enjoyed seeing things from Ragnarok's perspective here! Great job!

I could never do what Rose and Dart have had to do. This was a good chapter though, these are questions I feel they have definitely asked themselves. And Arkie is a hilarious name lol

Poor Albert! Emilie is going to be so heartbroken!

Hello,

This is quite an incredible story and I am very interested in where you were going with it. If you are not planning on finishing it (as it has been twelve years since the last chapter was posted) would you please put up an outline for what you had in mind for the rest of the story?

-Ms. Zeal

I just read the whole fic again :D Love this story. Any chance of an update? Don't feel awkward about the long time between updates. I just updated my megafic not too long ago and I've been on it for eight years. Getting near the end, too! Yaaaay

I do love the environment you've created and the characters that you've made. It's very enjoyable all the way through.

It has been a long time. This as the one that started a lot for me. Some of us haven't forgotten our roots, Shade.

Shade...i just finished re-reading this EPIC store for easily the 8th time since finding it years ago. By far my favorite read...im well aware of the semi-permanent hiatus listing about, however, i really hope you decide to come back to this story. 7 years of cliffhanger is killing me, as well as all the other readers!. regardless, soooo amazing!

It has been a long time. It is good to revisit this one again. Dark paths it takes, but I loved the epic fantasy it induced. I miss this story.