Your story was very well written and I enjoyed it. I loved the courtship in the last chapters and the resolution of the misunderstanding. I think my favorite chapter was chapter 14, probably because of the delightful kisses! Thank you for the story!

Delightful story, faster HEA, not too much angst! Thank you

I love this story because you actually show Elizabeth being vivacious and cheerful, we actually see what appeals to Darcy and why he loves her. Too many fics only show her being resentful, unkind or uncharacteristically meek. You do a good job characterising both of them where he still screws up allowing his introspection and improvement, but it's not such a disaster because they're already in love. Thank you for this wonderful story.

Cute. A little too much of the original dialogue at times but charming enough.

ahhhh i gotta get me some Burns now. Beautiful stuff. Wonderful story, thank you so much for the smiles!

It’s refreshing to have them clear the air so openly and honestly. Nice chapter.

I love this story! By the way, you mentioned Charlotte in here around the middle. Supposed to be Mary. Anyway I love this Darcy. Thanks for sharing!

I have read the story before and enjoy it each time.

I particularly like Mary's initial response to Mr. Collins proposal. She started as she meant to continue, with her as the center of his world. I am not sure I ever made the Mr. Burns - Excellent, Excellent ... connection. I assume it was intentional.

It is hard to tell the early story from Darcy's POV . He has to admit his attraction and affection while still demonstrating his hubris and disagreeability. It is a hard row to hoe, but you manage well enough.

Thank you for sharing this.

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Richard is handsome on my mind, I dont know why haahahha

I dont know, but sometimes I found Mr Collins funny hahaha

A very different version of Darcy.

Bless you for not resorting to having Elizabeth call Mr. Darcy "William." So many stories speak about his given name being too much to bear. Gross. Elizabeth's name has 4 syllables and is never questioned!

I enjoyed very much. Thank you for writing. -t.

This was such a great story! I really loved how Wickham wasn't the main bad guy in the story. It was nice to kind of have him out of the way early on. I also really loved you're Elizabeth and Darcy. I felt they were very much in character and yet this was a different take on their story. Thank you so much for sharing this I really enjoyed it! You are a wonderful author.