That's what should have happened I love it! Babe all the way

I like it, it's different. Well done!

This story need way to early. But I was waiting to read about the date. Sniff sniff!

Yes he is badass.

I would love to have been there! You made it sound so realistic!

God, great job!

yep that badass is like every woman's wet dream and you write him so well.

Fantastic story. Love the lead up in Boston, te kids in the Alley and of course the fight with Joe. All scenarios I can picture easily.

I'd like to beat the sh- out of Joe, good job. He's such a jerk.

I loved it, from first to finish. The takedown with the Boston crew was great, and I loved the banter with the new guy over his hero worship. :-) Hilarious.

Loved his talk with Stephanie, and that in this version, Ranger let Steph off the hook and told her that the deal was a joke, but that he definitely wanted her. Loved that he is taking her on a date first to "talk".

I definitely loved the scene with Morelli. THIS is the scene that I think every Babe has wanted to read since the beginning of time. Morelli coming to Rangeman loaded for bear and Ranger taking him down and threatening... no... PROMISING him what would happen if he didn't get his a$$ in line. Loved Morelli submitting to Ranger. Ranger is definitely top dog.
Excellent writing. Loved it.
Maggie M.

Terrific!

Ranger as he should be, morelli as I like to see him,nice, would be nice to see another chapter

:) ranger just taking names and kicking ass!

That was awesome

I'd love to have you write about that other side of Ranger, the not-a-badass side. I know you would do it justice.

Too bad your Joe is all temper and no common sense about his personal life. He'll get really badly hurt one day.

Goody, what a terrific chapter.