A wonderful, exciting tale, complete with romance, drama, humour, suspense and a happy ending. I was hooked from the outset. Thanks for this composition.

I enjoyed both "sweet revenge" and "the wager." Both were so wonderfully written and had me at the edge of my seat with each chapter. I think maybe you should write something with Toby and Drusilla meeting again after she left, maybe of her being more confident and him trying to pursue her. It can be a one shot or something. Just to give us a peak. Anyway, it was amazing! Good job!

I love your fics! Great prose consitant updates gods Toby was a horror in this one!

I do have an idea for a fic if you're interested.

Toby gets cancer and Sarah wishes for the goblin king planing to barter with him to use his magic to cure Toby.

I know done to death.

But Jareth doesn't answer, instead the Goblin queen does, seems Jareth has been overthrown and is in an oubliette somewhere.

Fizzbin! LOL Star Trek shout out!

Oh my gosh, this was even better than the first one! Again, mind blown by how amazingly you write these characters, especially your OC's. Loved it, absolutely loved it!

I lovr your story, was so glad to find this one again fate a month.

Wonderful story with a great ending! The natural maturing if the characters was well done, and I was hooked from beginning to end.

Nice little world building with the chess game gives us a nice little insight into the world you're building.

Wonder if Sarah will apologize, I'm still loving Jareth.

One thing I forgot to mention in my last review, Jareth brought up an interesting hole in Dart's plan without his memories, Jareth has no reason to marry, no reason to obey Dart.

Ah well Dart will lose the wager so a moot point I guess.

I'm with Jareth here, Sarah should have taken into account that Jareth is from a different culture.

Again loving the interaction between the characters.

I absolutely love your stories. You write so well! Truly enjoyable, lovely, and I do hope you continue! I eagerly await your next chapter!

I have a small planning period during my day and it is always wonderful to come across a new chapter. Thank you so much for the regular updates!

Very enjoyable story.

Well that is an interesting wager I like. Can't wait for Sarah to meet old Jareth.

Loved way the parting was done very nice.

Dart is very devious, I like, he makes for a great antagonist.

Oh my! I can't wait. Your fanfic is so incredible and mysterious, i mean so original! Keep going please 3

Oh my gosh! That is intriguing! I really had no clue where you were going to take the story. I'm so hooked right now. Thank you for the steady updates.