Reviews for Takano's Attempts at Pick Up Lines (Feat Ritsu)
Guest chapter 1 . 3/17/2017
hahaha I read that and just started laughing so hard I love it
Shiranai Atsune chapter 2 . 3/9/2017
I didn't get that pick up line.
coco chapter 9 . 5/20/2016
you have nor discontinued this, have you? plzz write more.
deb chapter 4 . 5/5/2016
absolutely loved it. Write more plzzzzzzz
AOTFMAAmazing chapter 9 . 2/20/2016
Lol
SaySaeri chapter 9 . 10/4/2015
Omg Masamune you omg lmao. Great chapter! Sorry about the last review, I thought I had already reviewed that chapter but was unsure so I entered the ! and when it went through I was like huh. Can wait to see that happens next! u
SaySaeri chapter 8 . 10/4/2015
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C'sMelody chapter 8 . 9/5/2015
These are hilarious. Keep going!
Yaeko Cho chapter 8 . 9/5/2015
As per usual Riruka, you've done a great job! Detail was spot on, no wasted words, imagery was there, and last line impactful!

Keep up the great work! 3

(And- first!)
pantonecandy chapter 7 . 5/30/2015
I agree! Riruka is doing an excellent job. ;)

Can't wait for an update!
angelikaperez0 chapter 7 . 4/12/2015
PLEASE UPDATE!
broccolishadow66 chapter 7 . 4/6/2015
Update! 3
Guest chapter 7 . 3/18/2015
Thank you for the update!
Animebaconlover chapter 7 . 3/19/2015
Too cute
SaySaeri chapter 7 . 3/18/2015
lol that ending author's note. This was so adorable ahhh!
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