I swear to Satan, this fandom will be the death of me. TOO KAWAII IT BURNSSSS
AnE makes me realise how sad I actually am.

So cute! And so well done with this minimalistic kind of style - got them all in character and everything. I can't decide whether I like Sugoi-chan or Ryuu-ojii best. ...I'll go with Sugoi-chan. Yeah. That one has a nice ring to it. And Rin? Don't ever change, man. This is exactly that attitude that makes people unable to shield against his charm. Even grumpy old Ryuu-ojiis. Great work!

What is wrong with people in this fandom. You guys just can't stop being so adorable. WHY?!

THAT WAS FREAKIN CUTE IM GONNA CRY!

O wow this is brilliant! Had me laughing all the time xD
Shima asking about the bases...ha ha xD And I loved Rin's comment about running for the bus together ;D
I'd like to tell you about all the other things I loved about this fic, but then I would just be repeating the whole story...:D
I'd love to read more about this! Thanks a lot for the great read :D

Loved this, so cute :3

If you do continue it, I'd love to read it.

i like that you went with straight dialogue, and i think you pulled off quite the feat capturing the essence of each character only being able to go off what they were explicitly saying to each other. i don't mind it staying a one-shot, but i'd definitely keep reading if you kept writing.

Too cute! Absolutely too cute! Man, I love your works! You're really great at dialogue. Totally enjoyed this fic.