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It's great
I want to know more about this alternative world of the ASL brothers

Well, I'm probably gonna ask my mom about "wolf", because she teaches me random Bangla words if I ask. I'm not a fan of OCs, so I'll stop reading (not that you've updated in a while), but good writing. Keep it up!

Amazing story this is.

Please update.

Please update this story soon. And please keep ace and sabo and Thatch and white beard alive in this Story and please Let ace and sabo and luffy meets Whitebeard crew and Rayleigh tells them about Roger D Gold and please let luffy and ace and sabo have 2 Devil fruits each of them and get stronger as they training and Mastered Haki as well.

At some point in time I really want them too see the white beard pirates and maybe stay with them a while or join or something! Really good so far

is the town inspired by Transtown from One Piece Unlimited World Red? that was a good game and some of the lines reminded me of that game's town!

Love the story
Keep on the writes

I really like this story I hope you continue you it! It's really good!

Really nice take on the ASL pirates!
Is is there any chance for a continuation of the story?

I really hope you have some of Luffy's crew join.. Maybe he gets split up from the spade pirates and sent back to the east blue when he is 17 years old. And that is when he gathers the straw hat crew so he can join back up with his crew. I think that be neat and for the crew to grow that way.

i really like to see luffas crew join as well

THIS. IS. BEAUTY. THIS STORY IS BEAUTIFUL AND NOTHING WILL CHANGE THAT.
:D I love that you mixed it up with the crew members, making new characters and putting them into action, throwing the canon in the dust. As much as I love the canon characters, I do appreciate these changes, especially in the fanfiction world where you have the freedom to change the story as you wish. I think this story has great potential and I'm looking forward to seeing how it progresses as more crew members show up and the characters grow closer. Please continue!
My guess: Sniper

very nice, still a fan of nekari and gale. The reveal of there parents was exactly how the crew should have acted, im just wondering how open that fact is going to be with the new crew members. All in all it got me just as exited as the other chapters and made me even more stoked for the next oc.

Updates Please!