uh so,, i will be disappointed ? that was it? .. oh well, it was really good. And i would like to read more. But yeah.. Thanks for writing this.

Wonderful idea and great story. I think you could describe your characters more, so the reader can imagen more the situation and the feelings. I hope you write a new chapter soon.
Lg from me

This is a really great story... Thank you for sharing !

Whoa...I'm so expecting a revenge one shot from you right now, it's not even funny! Damn, I didin't even know I was holding my breath, until Akihito said Asami's name! Your good! I just can't see Asami letting this go. And, just who was Mr. Ootori's son? Why was he going to the hospital to see his son? Was he the guy that shot Aki and Aki's guard shot him? Or, is he Akihito's dad, and Aki just used his mother's family name?

Like I said, you have to do a revenge or sequel piece for this!
Awesome!

B reading U!

Continuation...
Takato & kou woke up to find asami cuddling akihito intimately 3
Hehe...good job, nice story XD

Rhe-chan

I think it's a really good story! Just work on characterzation a bit more, and also you may not want to bold your text. Nevertheless, it's a sweet story!

owww :( poor Akihito :( but i hope he will be okay :D thanks for the story! :D it was great :)

Will Asami get the guy who shot him?

good story though a bit OOC for both of them. I suggest that the font should not be in Bold for your next chapters as I can't figure out the highlight of the story if everything is in Bold. I'll be waiting for the next chapters.

That was ok I'm glad you didnt kill akihito or asami off because I don't like them to die in any of the story so thank you I can't read story where one almost die but I don't like when one dies in these story

Yay...another great story I really love you , well I really hope Aki chan will be okay and I really want revenge for what they did .
REVENGE... ASAMI...THEY...HURT...AKIHITO
I hope the next chapter he kill them
Wait for next chapter
Update soon.