| Reviews for Betrayal and Redemption of the Sweetest Kind |
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  anonymous chapter 4 . 7/31 good chapter . a romantic prequel and adventurous backstory would be great |
| Guest chapter 3 . 7/31 super chapter make more stories |
 imballinst chapter 10 . 6/15 Thanks for writing up this story! Some things were a bit too rushed IMO, as if they came out of nowhere. I'd say it is a good idea to take it up slowly and have some kind of build up, so everything sets up a nice puzzle. |
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/18/2019 Why make gary a bad guy and make his starter pokemon betray him |
| Flenners fanfics chapter 10 . 12/3/2018 please do a sequel |
| Guest chapter 10 . 3/21/2018 Plz write more |
| TechnoGalen chapter 9 . 2/13/2018 More forgiveness crap, typical spineless pansy. |
| TechnoGalen chapter 3 . 2/13/2018 Tone it down on the flashbacks. |
| titli chapter 10 . 12/5/2017 interesting. but you should have completed the battle. yet an excellent story and i hope a lot more will come |
| Guest chapter 10 . 11/19/2017 Hey man. This was a great story. Only thing, in the first chapter not sure if I misread or not, but it very much seems as though Charizard and the 4 others are the ones that leave, when later in the story they are the ones that stayed. Other than that, loved this story. Keep it up! |
| 2lazy2login chapter 10 . 5/20/2017 Okay, not the best story ever, but that was expected of a first story. Not that it was bad, it could just have been better. I, personnally, am sick of all these betrayal story where as soon as the traitors see that Ash is powerful they want him to forgive them. It's better when it doesn't work like that, or when Ash refuses their apologies. But at least, you waited the very end of the turnament to make them "regret" and you even showed that not all of them really wanted it, if I understoof Misty correctly. Also, I'm glad this wasn't a "Ash has all the legendaries/control aura like he's a god/have a new OC ennemy that want to destroy everything". He still had legendaries, but not all of them. (I should ask why everyone want him to have Darkrai, I can understand Mewtwo but why him ?) So, all in all, not a perfect story, but one I appreciated, even with the problems it had. It's funny to think Pikachu betrayed Ash "because he was weak" only to end up with a kid who ... Is weak. Yah, it's funny when you think of that. |
| xsdfghk chapter 10 . 4/11/2017 fuasbl;gh |
| Tmm chapter 1 . 8/28/2016 This along with all your other stories are crap! Only idiots would like them. |
| crazylucsrio123 chapter 1 . 8/24/2016 good story |
| crazylucsrio123 chapter 1 . 8/24/2016 noooooooo y u make pikachu betray him |
