PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE WRITE MORE!

OH, MY, GOD. My heart breaks for Bulma. To have that type of guilt can eat away at someone. I couldn't bear it were I in her situation. I'd probably just ignored it as best I could and lash out at anyone who dare to even look me the wrong way. And she's pregnant! I have high hopes that the baby will be their saving grace. God, I'm so curious as to how everything could possibly work out in this au. There is no dragon balls and the sayians are back. I'm also curious about what's happening on Vegeta's side of things.

I'm not sure if you'll both continue this story but just know that I LOVE, LOVE, LOVE IT! OMG, the concept/plot is amazing and brilliant! I don't think I've ever read anything quite like it before. It's so refreshing and captivating and leaves readers like myself very curious and wanting more. Your writing style is great as ever but I shouldn't be surprise since your stories never really dissatisfy me before. This is also the first time I've ever cursed at the scroll bar when I realized it couldn't go down any further, lol.

Anyway, thanks for sharing!

What a wish! And they have some history... Interesting.

Hope you'll consider continuing this sometime cause I'd love to read more, Please Please Please.

you're seriously gonna stop this story at the point where it's at? ARE YOU INSANE!? Pssh. Naw. Just cruel.
Here's to hoping you come back.

An excellent start to a very promising story! I hope Goku will be able to make it back to everyone, maybe that way he and Chi-Chi can have Goten. I love Trunks, but it's always more interesting when he's got his partner in crime fighting alongside him! Hope you'll consider continuing this sometime cause I'd love to read more! :)

Any chance of an update?

I hope so! I always liked the concept of Vegeta being evil - and doing just this. i can't wait to read your take on this!

I just stumbled upon this story and I am happy did! Even though it's only one chater so far, I already feel connected to bulma, and can almost feel her own emotions. I hope you update this soon!

Please post anther chapter soon! I cannot wait to read more. I am really hoping we will get more insight from vegeta and what he was thinking therough out this!

Vegeta makes his wish behind everyone's back! I love that plot. A lot of times I wonder how that never happened in DBZ

This story looks amazing! I love this idea of evil Vegeta still lurking, whilst on earth.

Are you updating anytime soon ? I really want to read the next chapter soon!

Waiting for an update! I hope we get to see Vegeta's perspective as well!

I'm dying to read the next chapter! I hope there is an update coming soon. This story is fantastic !

This is very well written, and very sad. Still, I can't wait for the next chapter so please update soon!