Interesting story I can't wait to read more and find out what happens next :)

This is a good story and I like the idea of it. I think you need more details though. Did you notice that you repeated a chapter? Chapters 3 and 4 to be exact. I really do like this but you spelled Quidditch wrong two different ways. Other than that I really do like this story. :)

Oh I like this. The chapters are a bit short, and you could go into a little more detail but over all its very good.
Good job :D