This is depressing. The author notes are almost as long a as the chapter. I don't read them but i hate having to flip past them.

I think I'll read something else.

Good

great story!

One of the best I've read!

Loved it awwwwwww

this is not at all how james and lily should be portrayed this is nothing like the real ones

There's this thing called "line breaks", I would have invested in them if I were you. Other than that, I enjoyed the plot of this story! Not too sure how I feel about your writing though, grammar-wise. That weird POV switch confused me for a little, I didn't understand why you did it, seeing as it didn't add anything to the story...

Love this! It's one of the first fanfics I've ever read, so thanks for writing it :)

not all of them are against voldemort. there is a dirty rat among them...

TWENTY CHERRIES!

I luv peanut butter too. Maybe that's why Sirius and I are so nutty. (get it, nuts, nutty?)
To bad my school's nut free. only 3 weeks left.
Wait, does that mean I can't go to school? And if I have a friend who's allergic to nuts, is she allergic to me?

thank you so much for having it be Romulus, Remus and Troy. I cant tell you how happy that made me

I loved how you began the story! It was really nice. Interesting concept so far, but Mrs. Black would never talk to a muggle. She hates them. And doesn't James have hazel eyes? But those are just nitty-gritty details and didn't take away from the story. :) You're an amazing writer. The way you formed your sentences made it sound like a fairytale, no idea why. I'll keep reading! :)

Haha good one with cupid and psyche it's one of mine Favourite storys from Greek Mythology to ! 3

It's So Cute .

And A love your story btw :D 3

i DONT THINK UR ATHORS NOTES R LONG!i PERSONALY LOVE 'EM! i LOVE SIRIUS' CHARACTER!sO FAR SO GREAT!)