Reviews for What Lies Within
david.teague.3950 chapter 2 . 4/24
It's too bad Piccolo didn't provide them weighted clothing as a just in case for after the Saiyans' I mean seriously the only two in the show to my knowledge that use them are Goku, and Piccolo. Vegeta trains in a Gravity Chamber that goes up to 300 times Earth's gravity, but he'd get more training if he had weighted clothing.
Rimuru68 chapter 15 . 4/15
Honnestly i love this whhole story and cant wait to see the end (no mattter how much i hate finishing a good story)
Monster King chapter 15 . 4/3
Great job please continue
drr chapter 15 . 4/2
its awesome to see a new chapter for this story. Also Im sorry to hear things got so hectic but I applaud you for returning and sticking to this story thanks a lot and I look forward to reading more in the future.
R-king 93 chapter 15 . 4/2
Awesome chapter
Gamelover41592 chapter 15 . 4/2
excellent work on this chapter and welcome back :)
buterflypuss chapter 15 . 4/2
good chap
gazz uzumaki chapter 15 . 4/2
Bit too melodramatic for my taste and not enough in terms of plot development but its fine I guess.
reaver216 chapter 15 . 4/2
Awesome chapter can't wait for more
Monster King chapter 14 . 3/10
Hope you eventually continue I liked the story
Al18 chapter 14 . 1/30
Good story
Domonic chapter 14 . 7/19/2019
Glad to see you pickung up where you left off. Theres too many stories out there that get abandoned for onw reason or another. I hope to see a completed marker on thia story one day! Good luck and good writing!
Liantei chapter 14 . 7/8/2019
Oh I'm so happy to see you're still passionate about this story! It was always my favorite of yours and I've re-read this one quite a few times so I'll be super happy to see you continuing it somehow :)
TeraBaapBSDK chapter 1 . 7/7/2019
LOL, i am out. I want to rinse my mouth after reading this. What the hell i just read
Monster King chapter 13 . 6/17/2019
Great job please continue
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