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david.teague.3950 chapter 2 . 4/24 It's too bad Piccolo didn't provide them weighted clothing as a just in case for after the Saiyans' I mean seriously the only two in the show to my knowledge that use them are Goku, and Piccolo. Vegeta trains in a Gravity Chamber that goes up to 300 times Earth's gravity, but he'd get more training if he had weighted clothing. |
Rimuru68 chapter 15 . 4/15 Honnestly i love this whhole story and cant wait to see the end (no mattter how much i hate finishing a good story) |
Monster King chapter 15 . 4/3 Great job please continue |
drr chapter 15 . 4/2 its awesome to see a new chapter for this story. Also Im sorry to hear things got so hectic but I applaud you for returning and sticking to this story thanks a lot and I look forward to reading more in the future. |
R-king 93 chapter 15 . 4/2 Awesome chapter |
Gamelover41592 chapter 15 . 4/2 excellent work on this chapter and welcome back :) |
buterflypuss chapter 15 . 4/2 good chap |
gazz uzumaki chapter 15 . 4/2 Bit too melodramatic for my taste and not enough in terms of plot development but its fine I guess. |
reaver216 chapter 15 . 4/2 Awesome chapter can't wait for more |
Monster King chapter 14 . 3/10 Hope you eventually continue I liked the story |
Al18 chapter 14 . 1/30 Good story |
Domonic chapter 14 . 7/19/2019 Glad to see you pickung up where you left off. Theres too many stories out there that get abandoned for onw reason or another. I hope to see a completed marker on thia story one day! Good luck and good writing! |
Liantei chapter 14 . 7/8/2019 Oh I'm so happy to see you're still passionate about this story! It was always my favorite of yours and I've re-read this one quite a few times so I'll be super happy to see you continuing it somehow :) |
TeraBaapBSDK chapter 1 . 7/7/2019 LOL, i am out. I want to rinse my mouth after reading this. What the hell i just read |
Monster King chapter 13 . 6/17/2019 Great job please continue |