Damn. Oh well. Sucks that this is abandoned, was shaping up to be a great story. Still, I won't be a dick. Thanks for not removing what you did post, and letting people enjoy it.

This whole story is a gigantic mess, it always had some high points, so I believed it would improve, but it didn't.
Too many OCs introduced, that have no impact on the story overall.

I didn't even read chapter 9, hoping the Authors note would shed some light on what this clusterfuck really was about, but no. This story is absurd, and is not worth your time to read.

That was pretty interesting, though I am just a bit confused as to what is going on (probably need to reread the preceding chapters).

But this alternate Harry is pretty neat.

Good chapter, covers a number of different things. It's nice to see a reality where Snape isn't treated so horribly as he was in canon, though.

I wouldn't like being related to Bella, either, though Sirius isn't entirely sane himself.

Oops, a good thing Kreacher wasn't quite dead yet when Evan thought he wanted some apple tea...

NOOOOOOOOOOO! ;(

This was an amazing story... if you ever change your mind, I'll be right with you.

Thanks so much for writing this, you're awesome!

I don't usually read stories with Snape/Lily but this is looking good! No James bashing either!

shit man i loved this story but i understand there maybe some personal issues can u atleast put this story for adoption so that somebody can adopt it...

I'm sorry to hear this. I've found this story very interesting, especially in trying to figure out Harry's role. After your revised Chapter 9- which gave a little more insight- now I'm REALLY interested. I like the depth you've given the characters. They are fleshed out and developed and even though there are some changes to their personalities, which is believable due to different events happening in their lives, they still seem in-character from canon.

However, I understand things happen in life and I hope one day you'll return to work on the story again.

This story makes no sense.

I still look forward to updates for this story, but I have to say that it has gotten a bit harder to follow what is going on in the last couple chapters. Particularly the part where Harry tried to convince Sirius and James and ends up with the weird muggle couple who know something about his dimension hopping and this burning thing? I felt like it passed mysterious and ended up in confusing. Then again, maybe I just didn't reread the previous chapters well enough before reading this most recent addition and therefore don't remember plot relevant set up for this chapter.

It's getting more interesting :).

You probably aren't going to choose any pairings but could you please consider a slow paced Lyall/Harry one ?

Very interesting story. I like how Severus is still in-character even while married to Lily. I also like the name Arsenia, I think it's fitting.
Although you would think Bellatrix would visit Lily's shop at least once before, it exists for years after all. Why would she attack her in plain sight anyway? I know Bella is crazy, but most of the time in canon she was shown to be somewhat rational.
I also like Sirius and Bellatrix being frenemies, even if it's not canon

I really like this story so far. You've found a way to take a familiar concept and write it in a way that isn't over done. I can't wait for the next update if you are planning one!

oh man :(. Cant wait for the next update! Its been excellent so far!