| Reviews for The Return |
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   anonehmoose chapter 36 . 8/2 AHHHHH PLEASE UPDATE! You can’t just leave it at that I want moreeeee! |
| Guest chapter 36 . 2/5 Me encanta esta historia, espero la puedan actualizar pronto |
| Kurumi chapter 36 . 8/2/2019 Are you guys still working on this story? |
| Kurumi chapter 36 . 6/17/2019 Please hurry and update the suspense is killing me! |
| CaitHawke4Ever chapter 36 . 4/17/2019 I Knew Naru and the rest of the family would rescue Mai! Great how Totochi’s own Aunt played a part in Mai’s escape. I would love for Naru to teach Totochi a lesson PK style. Because to me the only man who deserves to marry Mai,is Naru! Update when you can. MaiXNaru forever |
| AmyNChan chapter 36 . 4/16/2019 FREAKING YES! RESCUUUUUEE! WILL SOMEONE KICK THAT JERK IN THE **** PLEASE? |
| YurikaRose24 chapter 35 . 1/9/2019 please update. |
| Alexia1993 chapter 35 . 7/4/2018 I’m still reading haha I love the stories you write. |
| Zanataya chapter 35 . 4/30/2018 I do wish naru can save mail soon. naruisawsome your doing a good job with stay safe. I am truellt glad tl be reading your maixnaru stories. they are a rollercoater of emotions. keep up the good work on all of your stories. Its going to be a lot of fun finishing this one and seeing if another one comes out that follows this story. just both of you keep doing your best and please try tl update soon. best wishes, Z |
| xSapphirexRosesxFanx chapter 35 . 3/22/2018 Poor Mai, Please Let Naru to save her and take her right away from there. Please UPDATE really soon! |
| UniquelyMeLovesOreos chapter 20 . 12/27/2017 No offense to Naru and the you guys, the author, but I hate how over protective Naru is over Mai. If I was Mai I probably would have yelled at Naru by now but that's because I get irritated fast when guys are overly protective of me it makes me feel like I can't even brush my teeth without telling him and that's not necessarily a healthy relationship. I mean I TOTALLY understand as I am a real life danger magnet myselfand one my ex's acted just like how Naru asks' but after a while I got tired of it, I understood why he was TOO protective bit sometimes you need to breath and be able to be free in a relationship. I love the storey though but I hate how Naru acts, but it's not my choice in how the characters act. KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK! |
| Chelsealovesreading101 chapter 35 . 12/4/2017 plz update |
| Junegirl1 chapter 35 . 11/20/2017 I can't wait! love you guys! |
| D C JoKeR H S chapter 35 . 9/9/2017 Holy Hell! Sounds like hell's going to reign supreme in a mo! X'D |
| patricija udras chapter 35 . 7/29/2017 when are you going to update the last few chapters? :) |
