Loved the "untoasted toast" and the "dejected marshmallow." LOL And Sam filing away the pronunciation of Wyoming for later is SO like him.

One tiny thing: you say "strange sometime" and it should be "strange sometimes."

Dean thinking about how he knows his mom's dead with every blink and breath is so sad. Poor Dean. :'(

Love how Sammy brought Dean out of his dark thoughts and his thoughts about light toward the end were cool, too. Nice analogy.

Really well done. I'm favoriting this one. More fluff, please!

That was super sweet. You write well.