Ugh. I read this story over and over again and it only saddens me that you’ve given up on it

It really is a shame you never continued this story. It is probably one of my favorites by far. You have a talent and hopefully you never stop.

Oh man I wish you hadn’t stopped this story! It’s so good!

Pretty pretty please update soon! I love your story

Ah! You had to stop there?! This needs more, lots more. PLEASE UPDATE. Read ya Later ;)

Oh God, i LOVED this chapter! And the prophecy! You HAVE TO FINISH THIS STORY! I'm almost to the last chapter up and i want more. There has to be more. Please update soon! Read ya Later ;)

It's one of my favourite helsa fanfic. Please don't give up this story please. :)

Hi Commander Elsa,
Let me just say this is a fantastic fanfic. It's one of my favourite Helsa fics. The story line is complex and you explain the relationship with hans elsa so well. You have left the story at such a cliff hanger, I can't wait to read what happens next. Please keep on updating, you have a beautiful talent.
Thanks for the fanfic,
Your fan,
Fredelson the third.

["Yes," the Queen went on, "You may marry your peasant bride as you wish." Her expression turned dark. "But you will never set foot in this castle again. You will be stripped of your titles, your name and you will not receive one cent. You will have no contact with myself or with anyone else of the Royal Family. Your very existence will be void. So, yes. You have my blessing, but that is all you shall have.]

Elias and Freya. At least one of them confronted their evil mom. Goodness she's evil.

[Suddenly, Elsa was extremely aware of the closeness of their bodies and the feel of his bare skin. Her eyes fell to the delicate scattering of freckles over his shoulders and sprinkled across his chest. She realized that she'd never seen a man without his shirt on before, and she wasn't sure what she expected, but Hans wasn't quite as thin as he'd seemed underneath all of those layers of clothing. His height made him seem more lean than muscular, but his chest was sturdy and his shoulders were broad. He seemed to radiate heat, enveloping her in it; a feeling she wasn't quite used to, but not unpleasant in the least. She resisted the urge to wrap her arms around his middle and press her ear to the spot above his heart. She watched as his Adam's apple bobbed when he swallowed hard, clearly as affected by her as she was by him. For a moment, she thought he might kiss her again, and her pulse quickened at the thought. Their faces were inches apart, noses nearly touching as he stared down into her eyes over her shoulder, gently removing his hands from hers.]

Asdfghjkl. Just beautiful.

Reading this story I skipped the whole Kristanna and Rupunzel bits. Just skipped to the Helsa I would scroll down if if I had seen Elsa of Hans name I would stop and read that bit. But Wow the ending to this chapter Anna just heard about Elsa being courted? Holy shit. This story just got abandoned in the perfect cliffy. Aaahhhh. I need to know what happens. I need to know Anna reaction. Elsa and Hans reaction. Omg this is such a masterpiece one of the best Helsa stories I've read. If only you can continue this.

Once again another masterpieces unfinished.

["No, you asinine man!" She exclaimed. "I'm angry because you stopped. I just wish you would make up your mind about how you feel about me and everything else, because frankly I can't tell from moment to moment." Hans gaped at her in surprise, marveling that the proper Queen of Arendelle was angry because her once would-be murderer had stopped kissing her. It was so preposterous it was almost funny. "I shouldn't have done it," he told her simply. "I had told myself I would not kiss you until you asked me and I couldn't help myself." "You poor, virtuous fool…" She snapped mockingly, walking past him and starting toward the door. "You should wear your hear down," Hans heard himself say. Elsa paused, turning to look back at him over her shoulder. "I beg your pardon?" "You should wear your hair down," he repeated, facing her. "It's so beautiful." Moving toward her, he watched her tense as he drew nearer, clasping her hands together in front of her. The room had grown colder and yet warmer all at once. He could feel heat beginning to emanate from his own palms, creating steam in her frosty presence. Looking down into Elsa's lovely face, he carefully brushed the backs of his knuckles over her cheek. "And for the record, that dress is lovely, but it isn't you…" Elsa's eyes blazed with indignation at his boldness as he stepped around her, crossing to leave the room. "You don't know the first thing about me!" She told him acidly. Hans shrugged casually, unable to help himself from provoking her. It was sort of adorable to see her pale cheeks flushed. "I know you didn't want me to stop kissing you," he answered smugly, closing the door just as she threw a blast of ice in his direction. He couldn't help but laugh]

BAHAHA. He's such a Tease. Bahaha I loved this so much k had to go back and read it.

['Hello there Anna! Remember the murderous wretch who manipulated you into believing he loved you? Would you be the maid of honor at our wedding?'" "Oh please," she rolled her eyes, "we're not getting married. Our fates being entwined never necessarily meant we would end up…together." He hesitated for a moment, swallowing hard, but nodded.]

She still at it.

["Four little girls are the only people who can defeat an ancient sorceress?"]

Im guessing Elsa daughter, Anna daughter and Rupunzel twins.

["Of course I don't think that's with you, you arrogant, self-centered—" She stopped herself when snow began to fall lightly in the room. "I didn't ask for this, you know. If I could pick anyone in the world to find myself attracted to, it wouldn't be you!" His eyebrows rose, the smirk gone from his face. "You're attracted to me?" "As stupid and ridiculous as it makes me sound, yes, you absurd man," Elsa told him impatiently. "I want to hate you, and I thought it would be easy to forget about you, but I can't. I won't. Because the thought of you leaving Arendelle forever makes me feel strangely melancholy, and I hate it. And I hate you for that."]

Awe lol.

[Elsa's eyes widened as Hans closed the distance between them, cutting her words short by dragging her against him, cradling her face in his scalding hands as he crushed his lips against hers, nipping greedily at her lower lip. It was her first kiss, and he'd stolen that from her too. Letting out a growl, she brought her hands up between them, determined to haul him off of her, but realized that her hands weren't pushing him away but moving to encircle his neck as one hand twined into the thick red locks at his nape as she struggled to draw him closer to her. For the first time, she realized just how much taller he was than her as he pulled back slightly, searching her eyes for a moment, almost as if he were asking permission. She gave an almost imperceptible nod and he kissed her again, this time more carefully as if to make up for being so rough with her a moment before.]

He couldn't help it. Omg asdfghjkl.

["You can't run forever," she told him angrily. "But do you know what I think?" She waited for him to respond. When he didn't, she continued, "I think that no matter how much you try to stay away from me, you won't. Because I think you and I both know that the trolls were right."]

Asdfghjkl

[ "We'll see," he sighed, before leaving. Elsa sagged against the half frozen sofa, willing herself to breathe normally again. For the first time in years, Elsa felt the strange urge to be held by her mother. The thought brought tears to her eyes. She needed Anna.]

Oh goodness these two are the death of me.

To think that this story had two more chapters and is unfinished is killing me. I NEED MORE OF THIS MASTERPIECE. And I still got 2 more chapters to go.

Why is it that the best story's are the abandon ones. This aches me.

["I'm still not sorry about drawing that picture. You have to know you're beautiful, Your Majesty." Unsure of how to answer, she could only stare at him in confusion. His eyes softened. "You really don't know, do you?"]

Hans I love you.

["I don't care," Hans insisted. "I've been changed. I know I have. Even if I do remember everything, I'm still going to remember how I feel right now; how I feel every time I lay eyes on you."]

Asdfghjkl

[It is up to you to save him… Maybe she could save Hans. But who would save her if she was wrong?]

She still is doubtful but it's understandable.

Hans saved Elsa from an asshole that tried to kill her. Elsa crying in Hans arms tho. Asdfghjkl

[The snowman went on. "When Hans left, this," He brandished the parchment, "fell off of the desk he was sitting at. So, I picked it up." Frowning, Elsa took the paper from him and gasped audibly, nearly dropping it. "I didn't know Hans could draw," Olaf was saying, "It looks just like you! Only…" his voice dropped to a whisper. "I think he forgot to draw your clothes on you…"]

Oh my God. He drew her naked. I can't even.

["How dare I?" He asked, taken aback. "Elsa, I realize that we have a complicated history—" She snorted at this, shaking her head. "—however, what I think in the privacy of my own rooms is my business."]

Bahahaha. He got balls. I'm on love.

["You're very forward," she inserted lamely, backing around a table as he moved closer to her. "No, Elsa," Hans sighed, "Forward would be me telling you how incredibly attractive you are when you're angry; the way your cheeks flush makes the blue of your eyes glow as if lit from within." He rounded the table and Elsa realized she'd hit wall. There was nowhere else to back away. "Forward would be me saying how utterly inconvenient it is to spend every waking moment hoping for a glance of you." His hand settled on the wall beside her head and he looked down into her face, casting a shadow over her. "Forward would be confessing how completely fascinated I am by the color of your eyes, which are the bluest eyes I've ever seen. Your hair isn't quite white, yet it's not gold, like most blondes. But the worst part is your mouth." "My mouth?" Elsa glowered at him, trying to push him away, but he wouldn't budge. "I could write an entire sonnet about your lips. They're perfectly curved and shaped, neither too thin nor too full." His head lowered so that they were eye to eye. "Forward would be me admitting that I want nothing more than to kiss you right now."]

ASDFGHJKL. DEAD. IM REVIEWING FROM MY GRAVE.

["No," he finally murmured, "I wouldn't dare. Because, when I kiss you, I want you to ask me to. I want you to want me to."]

HANS MARRY ME. THIS IS A MAN. YES.

[Hans knew he should leave her in peace, but he couldn't find the will to move, fascinated by the delicate curve of her cheek. Crouching beside the bed, he reached toward her carefully; watching closely as he combed the hair that had fallen over her eyes back before gingerly brushing her cheek with the backs of his fingers. To his surprise, the tense expression on her face eased, transforming into one of contentment with the hint of a smile playing at the corners of her lips. He drew away, standing and backing away as if she'd thrown a blast of ice at him. He shook his head in denial, feeling the panicked thrum of his pulse coursing through his veins, internally chastising himself for his stupidity as he fled the room, forgetting about the library. He shut the door to his room, turning the key in the lock and sinking to the floor against it with his head in his hands.]

I loved this so much.

Ibloved how Hams saw how Elsa was with the Orphans.

Omg Hans flashback had me Teary. His brothers and mother were so mean. Poor Hans.

[Love is the most powerful magic of all. If only there was someone out there who loved him…]

This is so sad.

["Thank you," Elsa answered. "I still can't forgive you. Maybe someday…but I am grateful for the gesture all the same."]

Those walls will fall. This story is just so beautiful.